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Click hereAs the cab slowly made its way up the lane, Mark turned to go inside, but suddenly stopped and smiled at me. 'Jane is a funny woman isn't she?'
'Why do you say that?'
'Well. She broke her own damned rule again'
I stood, flabbergasted as he slowly wandered back towards the house. 'Are you coming?' he called as he sauntered into the house, hands in pockets, not a care in the world.
- COMMENTS
OGHMNWover 6 years agoJacqueline,
This double chapter story was Very Hot and Erotic. Jane does bring out the naughty side of you. I don't understand what it matters which category your story is in as it is fitting for both. Thank you for your Excellent writing and please continue to explore your writing skill and entertain us with it.
Obo1about 7 years agoSo why exclude him and deceive him at this point? It's just becoming cruel now. Not that it wasn't always cruel to fuck strangers while your husband works himself to death, but now even more so.
I do understand that it's just a rollicking sex fantasy and not meant to be gone over with a fine toothed comb. I enjoyed the story overall, it's just hard not to comment though when you've got the character rationalizing her actions away.
Pjotr64about 7 years agoLove your style of writing, can feel and al most taste your lust and sensuality. Would love to have traded places with Carlos
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charliebillabout 7 years agoI think this story could give me or an interested couple a perfect outline how to approach trading partners!!!
lorencinoabout 7 years agoDear Jacqueline1951!
Your stories move inexorable towards the realization of the fantasies you have aroused in my being as you concretise the carnal expectations you build in my manly bosom, and I fly carefree to sensual satisfaction. Such sprightly joy flows into an otherwise drab existence and I sigh with deep satisfaction.
Lorencino (1947)
