Retroactive Control Pt. 01

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"Jennifer, stop taking college so seriously. Cut loose; have some fun. Go to parties; live a little!"

He clicked Exit. There was a little more pain this time. Jeremy was still handing Jonathan a pizza, but he appeared to be at a smaller house. He looked behind Jonathan, and was surprised that Jennifer wasn't nearby.

"Where's Jennifer?" Jeremy accidentally wondered aloud.

"Do you know Jennifer? Jennifer Miller?" Jonathan asked.

"Uh, you could say that. Yeah," said Jeremy.

"How has she been? It's been a while."

"Oh, does she not live here?"

"Of course not! I haven't seen her in, like, two years. Me and her went our separate ways a while back."

Click. Jeremy was again looking at Jennifer and Jonathan studying together. Click.

"Johnathan, don't break up with Jennifer or let Jennifer break up with you. Do whatever you need to, to stay with her and keep the both of you happy."

Exit. Another headache. The house was different from either time, but Jennifer and Jonathan were both in the house. Jeremy was surprised to see that it was Jennifer answering the door this time. She was dressed rather provocatively in a black corset and miniskirt that emphasized her cleavage and showed off her gorgeous legs.

"H-here's your pizza, miss." Jeremy said.

"Thanks for coming so fast." She purred. She snapped her fingers, and Jonathan walked over to her. "Give him the money, dear." Jonathan handed Jeremy the money. "Good boy, now it's time for your treat," she said, patting her boyfriend on the head, and closing the door on Jeremy.

He walked back to his car with a few new ideas on how he and Lisa could have fun tonight with the remote.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Would like to read more of this tale

Gonna call it now: The old man who gives Jeremy the remote is actually himself many years older. It's not a bad trope for having been used before. I would still like to read more about Jeremy and what he does.

AnostusAnostusover 7 years agoAuthor
To the anonymous whose post begins "I've read this (and one more chapter)..."

I did previously post this to mcstories.com. I'm confused by your statement that none of the other stories I've written here are listed on my author page on mcstories, since aside from "Procrustes, Inc." all the stories I've written are on both sites with identical titles.

If you saw this story on a site besides Literotica or mcstories, it was uploaded without my knowledge or permission, and I'd love to be made aware of it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

I've read this (and one more chapter) on another website, but none of the titles of your other stories here on Literotica are on the other website's author page.

Is it really your story?

nudist26nudist26over 7 years ago

There is a lot of potential here. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Finish This Story

This story is great but it needs more! Another chapter or two could make this epic

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