- Incest/Taboo
- Reunited
- Page 2
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Pebbles got up, grabbed a towel, and left the room.
Michelle lit another cigarette. She took a puff, and stared angrily at her father. "You couldn't last ten measly minutes for me. You still care more about your pleasure than me."
Fred started to cry. He wanted to explain, but he knew there was nothing he could say that would make Michelle feel better.
"If you want to see me again" Michelle paused. "Make an appointment with Pebbles. Goodbye." Michelle walked out the room.
A few minutes later, Pebbles returned. She untied Fred and watched him slowly get dressed. She led him out of the audio-visual room, through a dungeon, and out the back door. Now he knew what felt so cold on the way in.
Fred couldn't bring himself to call Pebbles for another session. He felt embarrassed that she knew how weak a man he really was. He never saw his daughter again.
- COMMENTS
mezmerizedabout 6 years agomade it sound like Pebbles was going to be his Mistress, not the assistant to the Mistress. Could've gone on with a lot more mental aspects, sexual tension torture, and what the real reason was, for her to run away... if it was only because he went to a strip bar, then that's pretty lame, and if she's servicing men, she should/would know/understand exactly why he did it, to begin with.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoSeriously, what the hell? The storyline made no sense and was not sexy.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoThat ending really didn't do it for me. I found the whole story sad, and not erotic at all. Also his daughters reasons for leaving didn't make a lot of since, and her test at the end to win her back was really just stupid.
mBrowabout 14 years agoThe story is fairly well written, but I did not enjoy the ending. The path through Fred's humiliation was interesting but not very erotic for me, though it may appeal to others. But author chatbug is free to write as he wishes!
