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Naomi took a few minutes to recover, then started to tell Jane that she needed to break up with me. She promised to "work on" me, that she would have me eating out of the palm of Jane's hand by the time it was over. "Trust me," she said confidently. "I got you in bed with him in the first place, didn't I?"
The video closed a couple of minutes later with no further conversation, after all parties had reached orgasm. I sat back in my chair; I had not thought my mind could be blown any more after watching Jane's romps on campus, but my sister? Dear fucking God...
- COMMENTS
JRandyJover 1 year agoUnfortunately for you I read the entire series before I rate. 1* This was truly a waste of my time.
Anonymousover 1 year agoLow rating? Great story! Very well written AmorousFucker. Very erotic and descriptive. Can’t wait to read next chapter
AmorousFuckeralmost 2 years agoAuthorUmmm...
It's a free erotic story on Literotica. This is about exploring fantasies, not making the story as believable as it can be. I'm sorry if you didn't enjoy it, but all three stories in this series are rated better than 4, so I'm not doing too badly.
More to the point, this was my first endeavor into prose fiction, let alone erotic fiction, and I was admittedly rough. I haven't written erotica since the last story I posted on here, but I've been writing plenty, so I've been improving. Considering picking this series back up: I could see a couple of different directions this could go, if I feel like getting back into writing erotic scenes. I suppose we'll see.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoJust a wee bit over the top don't you think. There should be some believability in a story. I'm guessing that's why you have a low rating.
betrayedbyloveabout 10 years agoTalk about keeping it all in the family. Luckily he knows. Now he can plan his revenge.
