Ride Me, Baby! Ch. 05

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"Honey, what's going on?" screeched a high falsetto voice from the depths of the bathroom.

Gary appeared with Louise's pink robe on, a towel wrapped round his head and half a jar of moisturizer slapped on his face. All three of them turned to gaze in varying degrees of surprise at the speaker.

Mr Tattoo dropped the fist he was about to thump Rick with and looked rather embarrassed all of a sudden. "Look mate, I'm sorry about this." He shuffled on the spot and said sheepishly, "Didn't mean to disturb you and the...err...missus."

"Ooh anytime, big boy!" Gary simpered coquettishly.

Rick threw him a glance that clearly said, don't push your luck! Fortunately, Mr Tattoo backed out of the cabin almost as rapidly as he had forced his way in. When the door slammed shut again, all three of them breathed a sigh of relief.

"What the fuck have you been doing, you imbecile?" yelled Rick angrily. "I was about to get my head kicked in because of your stupidity!"

Gary pulled the towel off his head and used it to wipe all the cream off. "Yeah, mate, sorry!" he grinned amiably. "You see, there was this seriously hot bird in the bar and she so wanted me to give her one..."

He hiccupped and fell backwards on to the nearest bunk with a huge grin all over his face. Legs akimbo, he was fast asleep and snoring loudly in seconds. Louise turned over and shut her eyes. All in all she'd had more than enough excitement this evening. "Good night," she muttered from the depths of the pillow.

There was ominous silence from down below.

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Thanks again, Brett, for the proof reading.

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AnnOnymousFantasiaAnnOnymousFantasiaover 14 years ago
Forget about "talking" with Gary...

...throw him overboard while he's still drunk and passed out! (And if I were Louise, I'd burn the robe instead of ever wearing it again!) Great job - I love the humor!

miwoodsmanmiwoodsmanalmost 17 years ago
Must... kill... Gary!

We get to the moment we've all been waiting for and Gary spoils it for everyone! If I were Rick, I'd take Gary out on the deck, have a nice heart to heart with him, make him understand the situation, then toss him overboard.

(sigh) But I'm not Rick so we'll just have to put up with rachlou's teasing for at least one more chapter.

michchick98michchick98almost 17 years ago
DANG IT!

That idiot Gary puts a damper on all the fun! Can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Gary is a dirty dog!

I agree - he should have a little payback for his sins. The worst being his incredibly poor timing! <br><br>

Somehow I don't think Rick is going to just meekly go to bed.

rgraham666rgraham666almost 17 years ago
Another good one

The story's coming along nicely.

The author is doing a very good job with the relationship between Louise and Rick. That little scene in the cabin was very hot.

The secondary characters add a nice touch.

And I'd have fed Gary to the neanderthal. :devil;

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