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Click here"It's time to return home" He smirked.
To be continued...
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- COMMENTS
SensitiveHandsover 5 years agoI feel that this is a good story and youve made a great start. What turned me off though was the vulgarity of the sex scene. I feel like other words could have been used to express the feelings and lovemaking. Make it more romantic and caring rather than a quick fuck in the grass.
I look forward to the next chapter. Thank you for sharing.
DJ
Anonymousover 5 years agoThe story seems to be coming together and now looking forward to the next chapter.
Thitabeover 5 years agoI know there has not been a lot of sex so far because you needed to have plot and character development. I hope that in future chapters there will be a lot more. I like where the story is going so far and I am looking forward to future chapters.
