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Despite the interlude in the campground both Randy and Michelle were quite keyed up, so going back to the night club took a distant second to enjoying each other in a more relaxed and romantic manner. At the climax of this Randy dropped off to sleep and Michelle enjoying the cuddling warmth of her husband followed suit soon enough.
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James G 5over 11 years agoI've noticed that many, MANY of the stories in this category, tho set in the US, are penned by British authors. It's obvious because of spelling & word choices (it's a dessert CART, not a dessert trolley, for instance - but kudos for saying "panties" and not "knickers"). Finding a US based beta-reader would not only help with the spelling & grammar issues others have remarked on, but it would also help keep the characters "in voice" for where they're supposed to be.
Anonymousover 11 years agoIf I wanted it perfect I'd ask for it. This was great story and love it the way it is homer.
Anonymousover 11 years agoIt isn't just spelling mistakes, it's grammar errors, missing punctuation, correctly spelled words that aren't the word intended... All of which makes it very difficult to read.
