"Are you ok sis?" he asked with a worried look on his face.
"I'm ok. What about you?"
"Ok. Just startled me."
"Can you see the girls?"
"Yep, still right behind us."
"K."
They sat in traffic for hours before they really started to move angain. James seemed a bit more relaxed but he was still uptight. Claire seen a flash of orange on the side of the road and turned to face James when she heard him snort. She knew he could not take much more aggravation.
"Fucking great!" he bellowed. "Road work, one lane closed."
Claire looked at ththe time on her cell phone. 6:33 pm
It was a pain to keep getting over. Slowing down then speeding back up, all just to slow back down again. She knew she had to do something. The radio did not help. A bit of joking helped a bit but not enough. And then the traffic stopped. James was really fit to be tied. If this keeps up we will have problems, she thought. She looked around for something that would help.
"You hungry or thirsty?"
"No"
Not good she thought. One word answers are never good.
"I have to piss again."
"Ok." she grabbed the bottle as she slid over to James. She reached over undid his pants and fished his cock out. She held the bottle close with one hand and the other hhis cock. "Ok let it rip." Nothing happened. And nothing continued happen. Well almost nothing. As her hand held onto his soft penis it started to harden once again. She tried to reposition him and moved her hand up and down his shaft. He only got harder and she could feel every bump. She could feel his heart beat getting faster as it pulsed. It grew longer and the head turned a shade of purple. Her hand kept moving up and down, her eyes getting wider and she could feel her own heat building deep down. He was breathing harder and she could tell that he slowed down. Her thumb came into contact with a wet sticky fluid at the tip of his pole. And it lubricated her hand and his cock. She was getting wet just as James was. He grunted,his prick lurched, and spurts of white cum shot into the bottle and coated her hand. She was a bit light headed. Her own pussy ached. She couldn't let him know. And without thinking she raised her hand to her mouth and licked it clean.
She had her fingers in her mouth when James asked "Umm do you like that?"
Without thinking she told him "Yes, I think it is the best I have ever had."
Her pussy was still on fire and the hand that had worked its magic on James, found its way into her pants. She moaned at the first touch. Her breathing got rapid. She slid a finger into her hole and shuttered as her own orgams ripped through her very soul. Eyes open and turned towards James. He was trying to watch her and the road. Only to swerve and catch the berm a time or two.
A few minutes passed before she her him.
"Claire, thank you. But, why?"
She closed her eyes " shhh... I ... I... "
TO BE CONTINUED.
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Story should never have been published.
This story is so riddled with elementary mistakes it should have been picked up by the Literotica moderators, so I blame them not the author. OK, everybody has a different educational background and no-one is ever going to learn by trial and error. A patient editor should not just correct scripts for you, but explain where you have gone wrong.more...
Gawd-awful
I hope you had lots of orgams while you wrote this.
spelling, grammar, story flow, vocabulary
Normally I like the multiple sisters harem stories. But it is hard to read it when the story has so many problems with spelling, story flow and vocabulary. If you don't know the word, don't use it.
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I like your story premise, but it needs real work. You are not just making spelling mistakes. You are using totally wrong words in, for example, descriptions. A woman's breast is not measured in cap size but in cup size. Do not mistake the word 'too' when you need 'to'. You've totally ignored how they got where the story begins, what's in Montana, and really just who they are. What is His name? Most of the time you call him James, but once you called him sesame. In your comment, you claimed to have flushed out other stories better. FLESHED OUT is the term you are looking for. These things are not nitpicking. They are distracting, confusing, and ultimately infuriating to the reader. Yes, an editor or proofreader would help but you've got so many problems you'ld need to pay them a lot of money. The truth is, if you want to write AND post stories for the public to read, you need a better command of English Grammer and Composition. Some night classes at a local college would help. You need to not find it necessary to get an editor to completely rewrite your work, just check for typos. I'd like to know more about their journey but I can't go through this again. Language is basic. It is what we use to communicate ideas, dreams, music, poetry, tell story's, or just to say 'hello' to each other. You don't have a basic working knowledge of English. The written word took eons to develops to where we now are, don't abuse or misuse it.more...
Writing needs help ...
The writing isn't conducive to reading smoothly and enjoyably. The story seems to have some promise but there seems little background or foundation to this point.
While anonymous' comment is inane and banal, at least he used the correct word and spelled it correctly. When you step out and correct someone on their spelling or word usage, it helps to be correct to prevent making yourself look foolish.
The word 'bearable' was correct and was spelled correctly. In the context of the sentence, it means essentially tolerable as in; "I could bear to read it despite the errors".more...
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