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Then the party started again.
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Anonymousover 16 years agoReally bad...
Aside from changing tenses and misusing and misspelling many words, it was fine. Get a proofreader and a grammar book.
Anonymousover 16 years agoGet a Proofreader who knows how to spell . . .
"out" instead of our, "close" instead of clothes are examples of how to basically ruin an otherwise good story. Your plot line was acceptable but botching the words took your reader on a painful trip! Get a proofeader to review your work before you submit it.
