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Click hereTurning on the light inside the cab I looked over at my sister, her frazzled reddish hair, her nipples still poking out on her tee shirt, her tight shorts and lovely thighs and then leaned over and kissed her lightly on the lips. I then turned out the light, pulled back onto the roadway and headed home, wondering where we would go from here.
was perfect. You stopped it at the right time to let us use our own imagination as to what happens next AND no ch. 2. 99% of the time a second chapter ruins the whole story. Thanks....
seems way to rushed and unrealistic to many things that don't work
1) why didn't he get mad when she voulenteered him to help pick up trash
2) since you never mentioned any sex between them before or that he even thought about her that way it seems doubtful he would just let her suck him then feeland eat her
3) when they got to the beach and she just disappeared most guys would have found someone that could give her a ride home then split he had no reason to want to hang around waiting for her
as a fantasy it was passable as fiction it failed big time would have been better as a dream in the fantasy area
Although I am not into incest stories this was a sexy, well written story. Good luck in the contest.
Yes, please write more chapters - very hot and sensual. It was great writing. Thanks !