True to her word, Ferry called later that night. I was doing naked Tai Chi for me and Artemis.
"Well, it's over." I could detect a thickness in her voice that led me to think she had been crying.
"Rough?"
"You could say that. Shit, Kyle, the guy cheated on me. I wanted him gone. But, still, I broke down and was all girly-girly bawling my freakin' eyes out. Finally, I just pushed him out the door. I sat and cried for an hour before I could call you."
"Want some company?"
She paused for a long time.
"Thanks, but not tonight. I'll be all right."
"I can bring tequila," I said.
She laughed. "Just what I don't need. Seriously, I think I'll just sit here and have a one person pity party."
"Call me tomorrow?"
"What for?" she asked.
"Just to say hi. I don't want to worry about you."
"Ok, I'll call. Thanks, Kyle. I appreciate it."
"Take care, Ferry."
For more than the first time, I thought about Ferry as an attractive and sexy woman. Recognizing all the complications, let alone our firm's rules against involvement with co-workers, I wondered if maybe we could move in an interesting direction.
To be continued.
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Interesting idea for a storyline
This has definite possibilities, looking forward to reading more.
One thing I will say is that I don't believe in pointing out errors myself because I know for a fact that I couldn't do better in most cases.more...
Enjoying It
Thanks-very interesting. A few nice 'errors' too-I loved the way he made a 'racquet' when exercising, with the rope perhaps?
Nice!
I liked the excellent character development.
So many possibilities from this start!
Good start
One minor spellcheck error; discrete does not mean the same thing as discreet. That one bugs me, and it's happening more and more often, and from many different authors. That leads me to believe it's a spellcheck error, rather than the author's, but it's still distracting.more...
Great story!
What great writing...great character development....great, real life descriptions...great all around. Enjoyed this very much!
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