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To my fury, two streams of tears poured out of my eyes and ran right down my face. He kept holding his hand there and eventually, I breathed out.
'See?' he said, softly. 'Nothing there. No real change. No fat. Nothing.'
Two more streams came out of the eyes and down my face. He let go of my hands and took his own away from my stomach. He leant down and in towards me. He kissed the tears. His hands came up and he wiped them away properly.
'I'm sorry,' I whispered, humiliated beyond my wildest nightmares. 'I'm so sorry.'
'For what?' he said, his lips against my cheek. 'Feelings?'
'This,' I gestured, helplessly. 'It's so embarrassing.'
'It's just us, Rory. Just you and me,' he kissed my neck. 'You're so beautiful and even if you weren't, I'd feel this way.' He kissed my neck again and again. I put my arms around him and we pressed together again. He held me and I forced myself to breathe, as if there was no stomach and no-one there to impress.
'That's it,' he whispered, softly. 'Just breathe.'
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoNever left a comment on this site, but this is phenomenal writing with an even greater plot line! This deserves to be published and if that's in your plans, I hope you succeed! There's another writing site, called Wattpad. Not as hardcore of course but a lot of writers on there eventually become published authors and I feel you would make it as one. Good luck on your writing journey!
Anonymousover 7 years agoIt's been so long. I hope you'll continue the story. Every time I think I've found another story or writer as compelling, I realize I was wrong as soon as I re-read one of your chapters.
sm1982over 9 years agoBeautiful! I wish everyone that had low self-esteem had someone like Sebastian..aware of the inner doubt that lies in most and not believe/pretend it's not real/ignore how others perceive themselves. Cannot wait to see how the story progresses and how Rory will begin to accept what Sebastian is saying is true or at least come close to seeing within himself how Sebastian sees him.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agowell done! the way Seb lovingly reassured Rory was brilliant. Self-esteem issues are no joke. They lead to other mental health issues, hence his obsessive nature. Well done.
