"Easy terms will be made available," said Sam, his eyes running over me. "Have you ever been ravished on a lawn while surrounded by sweet smelling roses on a bright sunny day?"
"Ah, no, Sam."
"Well, if I see you tomorrow, you will be."
"Um, your front lawn is in plain view of the street," I pointed out.
"True. Have you seen the roses I have in the back yard? You'll like them."
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Nicely done!
A credible set-up, believable characters, and some hot sex. Your strongest point is your restraint. This is the kind of nonconsent/reluctance story that I enjoy reading. Save the over the top stuff for Sci-fi/Fantasy. Five stars.more...
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Definitely one of your best ones yet! Thoroughly enjoyed, especially that she acquiesced instead of just finishing him off & running (or him just raping her). Thank you!
ROSES ARE RED MY NEIGHBOR
just like the color of your buttocks. TK U MLJ LV NV
One of your best ones yet Ashon, keep it up.
Silly fantasy, but
... definitely erotic
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