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I went to sleep thinking about CC and Roxy and thought about how complicated my life still was.
To be continued.
- COMMENTS
Jedd11over 9 years agoEnjoyed this story early on, but as another commentor stated, it's becoming less enjoyable. So he's a freshman in college, so 18, 19 years old? What 19 year old has a threesome with two hot bisexual sisters and then whines, "I wouldn't have done it if you hadn't drugged me"? Or shares wicked tonsil hockedy with a smoking babe then runs screaming, "No!", like a bitch. Either give Sam back his balls, or just have DJ don the strapon and fuck him like the bitch he's behaving as. Come on Century, this story used to rock; make it do so again.
curiousvisitorover 9 years agoSorry for the negative opinion, but the latest chapters are becoming less and less enjoyable due to Sam being completely unreasonable. You may want to depict him going completely insane, but if it is not what you want, then you are definitely doing something wrong.
The only characters which are still somewhat believable are Saffron (sinking more and more into jealousy), Barb (hurt past the breaking point by the constant rejection and refusal of talking to her by Sam, the only person who she believed cannot intentionally hurt her) and maybe CC (although I don't exactly see why it was almost always Sam who she had to vent her agression on instead of trying to talk to him).
Sam is just becoming a rabid dog, biting everyone's hand who wants to be nice to him, instead of accepting that people do care about him.
Yes, Barb has hurt him by the abortion, but if her suicide attempt does not shake him and makes him realize that she really is serious about him and maybe she has changed and cannot forgive her, then his head is screwed on completely the wrong way, and he is not the goodhearted person everyone tries to tell him he is, anymore.
His reaction to his kiss with CC is another unbelievable situation. There is no way that someone would react by thinking on the few year age difference in the middle or after a kiss he was enjoying as no other kiss in his life. And still, this reaction is the mistake of his life? Come on... how about driving EVERYONE who cares about him as a man away?
The Janus bitches are completely ridiculous, their parents, too. Come on, they almost killed someone, pushed drugs on him and practically date-raped him. And no one is able to impress the possible consequences on them? No one beats it into their empty heads that they could even end up in prison for a long time? And the Sam, who is forever hurt by Barb's grave mistake would let them off the hook by their being grounded for a month and try to explain it to them in so civil manner, but he cannot even talk to Barb?
This was a good story, but Sam's transformation to a heartless wreck makes it very hard to keep this opinion.
rcwilliamsover 9 years agoGood chapter in this story, it had me hooked since the first chapter. Hopefully Sam will get his life together and decide on what he wants to do.
RedDuskerover 9 years agoGreat chapter, I liked that you made Sam and Saffron's relationship even more kinkier and he seemed to get into it a little more. It's probably heading to a final pairing with CC, which is nice, but I wouldn't mind an ending where Sam and Saffron become some sort of forbidden incestuous couple.
trite_readerover 9 years agoThere is no reason to like this character Sam anymore. His life is complicated because he made it so. He's an idiot to everyone, and yet you'd have us believe that all these older women are throwing themselves at him, and desperate for him. But you've given us no reason at all to qualify that. Dragging the story out won't make him more likeable.
The editing in this chapter sucked too.
