- Non-Erotic
- Sarah's Games Ch. 06
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Melissa's house always smelled nice, subtle shades of lavender and now... spice?... floating over the hardwood and leather décor.
Sarah followed the delicious aroma to the kitchen where she found Melissa setting freshly baked spice muffins on the counter.
"Oh good; you're here. Wow, you look nice. Hey, I've got something I need to show you. Remember the dress that..."
Sarah had to cut her off, "Um, about that, actually, I've got something I need to show you first." She was fumbling with the manila envelope containing pictures of the dirtiest thing she had ever done – graphic evidence that she had completed Melissa's prescribed punishment.
Earlier that morning Sarah had called and flatly stated, "Well, I did it."
And Melissa had simply replied, "Excellent. Come over."
Upon being summoned to Melissa's house, she felt nervous and guilty and dirty all over again.
Sarah wanted to look her best for Melissa. So, after much debate, she pulled on her uncomfortable thong underwear (exactly the sort of thing Melissa might want her to wear), some nice slacks, a cashmere sweater and strappy sandals.
Essentially, the nicest outfit she owned, but nothing compared to Melissa's clothes, especially the priceless dress she had... ruined.
Sarah checked herself in the mirror a dozen times, turning and bending this way and that, continuously fussing with her hair, "I hope she approves."
Now in the kitchen Melissa was gawking at the glossy 8x10 prints. "Wow, NICE pictures...DAMN!" She was fanning herself with the envelope, "...um, did it hurt?"
"Yes! It fucking hurt!"
Melissa put her hand over her mouth and laughed – they both started laughing like crazy.
"Aw, you poor thing..." And then she remembered, "Oh yeah, I've got something for you. Come with me."
With a big smile on her face she grabbed Sarah's clammy hand and pulled her around the corner into the bedroom.
Melissa's dress – the dress in question you might say – was hanging from a hook covered in sheer plastic. It was beautiful: long, elegant, wrap around style, with intricate hand stitching reminiscent of a Japanese Kimono.
Sarah's stomach flipped. She felt so bad about the dress and now here it was being rubbed in her nose again. She stammered, "Uh, I..."
Melisssa saw her friend going pale in the doorway, "Oh, no, it's fine. I had it cleaned! No problem. Really. You can't even tell. Seriously, don't worry about it."
She pulled Sarah all the way into the room and closed the bedroom door behind her.
"What I wanted to show go is hanging back here...TA-DA!"
There, on the back of the door, was another dress: shorter, smaller, similar wrap around design with and intricate forest scene spreading up and around from the bottom. It was STUNNING.
Sarah was thinking, "Wow, this is gorgeous but she'll have to drop a few pounds to fit..." when Melissa's voice, as if coming from far far away, finally filtered into her dizzy head
"It's yours. I bought it for you. Try it on!"
"What?" Ohmigod. No way! "Why would you buy me something like THIS?"
"Well..." She was pushing on Sarah's lower back. Pushing her towards the door – she tapped her softly on the butt, "...because you've been such a good girl lately; you deserve it."
Sarah was still trying to understand, "What? I haven't done anything to deserve THIS?"
"I think the pictures in the kitchen say otherwise."
Sarah blushed and laughed at the joke, "Ha ha. But how could you know about the pictures if I just brought them over today?"
Melissa smirked condescendingly, "Sarah. Honey. I've known since the moment you walked into my store. Now be a good girl and put on your new dress."
- COMMENTS
Joshua94almost 10 years agoI have to say well freaking done. This entire time (read them all in one sitting) I was enticed by what could or would happen next. You are such an amazing writer and I hope you continue to write more stories in the near future. I have recently wrote my first erotica story and while waiting for it to be edited; I had told myself that I wouldn't write another one. Reading this series has resparked my imagination and hopefully new ideas will become my new stories, Thanks for the inspiration and happy writing.
Anonymousover 17 years agoTelling an erotic story is supposed to be fun. If it ain't fun, don't do it. I don't want you to think you can't choose not to. Do what you want. It's your story. Your time and effort.
It'd be a shame though. There's talent there. When I first started writing I was pretty concerned with it. Votes, comments, emails. 'They keep us going'. Rubbish.
They're nice, but they're not why I write. Other people's praise doesn't 'keep me going'. I write because of the rush I get when I complete something. Really complete it. Properly. It's quite extraordinary. I've been so proud of my 9th story (and 4th novel length story), and finishing it, that I haven't written anything since. Right now, I'm not even sure if I will. But if I get the feeling to write again, it'll be because I want to finish something else. It won't be for the votes or the comments or the emails. They are very nice. But people telling you that you are good was never going to motivate you forever.
Maybe try a few short stories - like, complete stories, no chapters, but about three or four times the length of the previous chapters. Try to create a finished thing. Properly finished. Spelling, tenses, edited. It's a great feeling. Just awesome.
Who knows, you might catch the bug that hooked you in the first place, and you can return to this story with some idea of how to end it. As a writer, looking down the barrel of a seemingly endless story can be daunting. Know how you want to end it. You can pick a moral or you can shred one, that usually works if you want to tie a bow on it. Two or three more chapters would do it as a 'short story'. You'd have to replace this one though. It's okay written but it's real short and a bit of a bummer.
But anyway, yeah. I enjoyed the earlier chapters and gave all six of them fives. I just put the four out of five on this message after voting. Overall it's a fun romp, totally tongue in cheek, with some great naughty girl sex in it. And the promise of more. Which is why I'm sure lots of people go 'awwww' when they get to this chapter. This reader knew you were enjoying telling the tale in the earlier chapters. You need to get that back before you try it.
Be well.
SN
suggestivenessalmost 18 years agoAuthor/author's note/
This is probably the end of this series. Please post or e-mail your feedback or suggestions. Motivate me. Thanks.
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoReally would have like to get more into the the 6th chapter hope seven will be what i have come to love.
