Satyr Play 02 Pt. 02

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BurntRedstone
BurntRedstone
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When the injured Fae dragged himself to the bench under her, she knew she was in a prime spot for observing the Satyr. She recognized the Fae from the team briefing and knew he would likely attempt to contact the Satyr as he returned from work.

The Pixie Observer team positioned themselves in key locations in the city along Henry's daily path. They were using maximum stealth spells to hide from Fae observation as well, though this wasn't as critical lately. It was tiring and worse, boring, but it had finally paid off! The Satyr no longer wore the ring bound to the Fae's healing spell. That sure sounded like significant news!

She'd witnessed the Satyr was still able to draw the healing magic to himself, and she'd almost been blown from the tree when the Fae used it to heal himself. A brute force use of magic but undoubtedly effective.

It would be up to her boss to determine what to do with this news, but there was only one outcome she desired.

She wanted to stop hiding in that damn tree disguised as a stupid pigeon.

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Maintaining a smooth, confident stride, Roger walked away from Henry's condo, heading back towards the Path system. He'd witnessed Henry interacting with the injured man and just saw that man leave under his own power, completely healed. Henry was the focal point in Roger's current investigation.

He'd smelled the blood on the man. A lot of it. It set off some impulses he'd had difficulty restraining.

Roger was hungry. All the time now. He hadn't been able to appease that need. Not since that night in the hospital when everything changed.

No. When Henry changed everything.

As he walked, he maintained cautious surveillance of the area around him, tracking the movements of everyone within his observation zone. Tonight, that was only two punks spraying tags on the wall of an alley off the waterfront path. The hiss of the spray paint cans was unmistakable and familiar.

Then he smelled it. Beneath the bite of spray propellant was something sweet and savory. His mouth began to water. He turned his head, following the scent. It was the punks. He adjusted his step, moving silently as he got closer. The smell was coming off only one of them. The other stank of cigarettes, sweat, and grease.

"Creating art?"

"FUCKSHIT!" the unpleasant smelling one screamed in surprise at Roger's sudden appearance in the alley's mouth.

"I used to do some fairly righteous tags before I moved on to more aggressively subversive acts," Roger said with a grin. He struggled to remain calm as the scent was pulling him closer. The other one's nervousness was beginning to bother him.

"You some kind of badass rebel?" the calm one asked condescendingly. "Is that why you're wearing your hat's brim pulled down to hide your face? You here to show us how it's done?"

Roger grinned so they could see his bright, white teeth. "No, not at all."

He swung his left arm out, and his claws ripped the throat out of the smelly one. Gurgling, the youth dropped to his knees then fell forward onto his face.

Whistling quietly, Roger tilted his head up until he was looking into the terrified eyes of the deliciously scented one.

The young male stared back into the blood red orbs and noticed those white teeth were significantly longer and sharper than normal teeth. The youth struggled to keep from wetting himself. "What the fuck are you?" he whimpered.

Roger's whistling was reflecting off the inhuman features of the being before him. He'd come to realize in the days since his change that no one else knew these inhuman creatures were living amongst the population. He'd been gifted with a way to see the truth finally.

Coming back to the present, he realized his dinner just asked him a question. How rude he was to make him wait.

"I don't know. What are you? You're certainly not human!"

The youth lost control of his bladder, and Roger wrinkled his nose.

"You- you can see... me?"

"Yes... I can see everything now."

Mere steps away from the alley where Roger feasted for the first time on inhuman flesh, a young couple made their way along the riverside walkway towards a condo building overlooking Manhattan. There was a unit on the fourth floor that just became available, and they had a viewing tonight. Seeing it up ahead, they hurried their eager steps.

They were very excited to be getting a chance to move into such a lovely building in one of their favorite neighborhoods. It was so much more peaceful here and far less dangerous than the nightmare of where they lived now.

It was a virtual dream come true.

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 Anonymousabout 1 month ago

You would be one of the best authors on the site if you didn’t keep degrading your stories with main female characters getting with people other than the MC. You did it in the Shepherd series with Cat betraying Ben, the Jack Danner series with Diana fucking anything non-human with a dick resulting in her getting knocked-up by another male and now this one with Marisa betraying Henry with Nate. She is his main girl, the one who has a special bond with him, who can calm him no matter what, and now she’s tainted. I no longer care about her as a character and she was my favourite girl. I don’t get the fascination with bringing in side characters and having them have sex with the MCs girls. Henry is the MC. He’s the one we picture ourselves as when we read it, the one we want to be. It’s like having a hot girl want to have sex with with you but you turn her down so you can watch her have sex with someone else. It makes no sense. Even Tefler has ruined his masterpiece by doing it. So disappointing.

 Anonymous4 months ago

@Bluejayzz has a point when saying that the erotica seems to be becoming less important as the imaginative plot and characters take center stage. Sᴀᴛʏʀ Pʟᴀʏ has evolved into a well written fantasy novel with strong sexual elements, rather than being erotica with fantasy characters— and is greatly improved by the shift.

This is now a book that, with some editing, could be accepted by fantasy/science fiction publishers. With its interesting and varied characters and its novel and complex plot, Sᴀᴛʏʀ Pʟᴀʏ has become, chapter by chapter, a very readable novel indeed.

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 Anonymous6 months ago
Magnificent

I have been reading your stories since March of 2020. I am delighted with your grasp of character development, setting description, plot pacing, action sequences, and of course, toe-curling erotica. Unlike so many others I have read on this site, your emphasis on crafting an enthralling story punctuated by actual emotional connection in the erotic moments sets you apart. This story I feel is your best yet. It brings in a fascinating addition of the supernatural and feels much like I am reading a script for a TV show than erotic fiction. Keep up the good work, as reading your stuff is inspiring to my own creativity! Thanks again! ^_^

 Anonymous6 months ago

I love the story but I really don’t like the addition of Nate

johsunjohsun7 months ago

Damn good story. I hope there's plans to continue it.

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