And we were quiet for a while, but I was thinking. Did the fact that women had to face up to the pain of childbirth mean that all women were essentially submissive, either by nature or by design, or maybe even masochistic? I didn't know, but it was certainly worth considering.
One thing I did know: Kitten was mine and I was Kitten's, and we were a family. And that made me the most blessed man in the whole effing world!
Oh, and, gentle reader, just in case you were wondering? We did live happily ever after.
We really did!
(the end)
*****
Thanks to my readers for the many stars they've given out for this series. It was a fun, fulfilling story to imagine and to put into words. Perhaps someday in the distant future, long after we're all gone, a student of literature will pore through the ancient archives of Literotica in search of some submissions that are worthy of remembering, and I would hope that something that I wrote would perhaps deserve even so much as a footnote in his or her learned paper.
Thanks go out to Shysub412, a grand Irish lass, so she is, for her expert help in tweaking the good Father Oreiley's voice. Once again, she has come to my rescue! I raise a glass of Bushmills as a toast to her and wish her inspiration for her own writing and, more to the point, happiness for now and for always. Only she knows how she was honored within the depths of this tale.
Recognition in memoriam to French photographer Jeanloup Sieff (1933 - 2000) for his elegant and inspirational nudes, especially "Derriere anglaise, Paris, 1969," and for his statement recast here by Father Orielly about the female form being proof of the existence of God.
Finally, but most importantly, all my affection goes out to you, Chef Lisa, my darling, adorable, womanly wife, for the continuing support you provide to me over my writing about my strange notions about the essence of love in its many forms. I want you and everybody who ever reads this to know that you are the world to me. I couldn't do it without you, Pooky, because you're my utmost inspiration!
Peace!
-Ham_Sandwich
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I did
And I just want to thank you for your kind words!
Richest Blessings!
Thanks most humbly!
FantasyGir1, check your email!
Once again, thank you!
HS,
I rarely favorite stories, much less all in the series. And even more rarely, do I leave multiple comments for an author. I truly hope that those who read this can appreciate and learn from it as much as I have (even being a submissive, I've learned). I am truly blessed to have a husband as gentle and loving as Gary, and I'm encouraging him to read them, as he continues to explore his dominant side. Not all D/s relationships have to be about whips and chains, pain and punishment ( though those can be fun aspects, if all parties agree). For any relationship to work, especially one involving D/s and BDSM, there has to be communication, trust, and honesty. You painted that picture in an eloquent, beautiful way.
On a side note, being A Christian, I love how you wove the priests story into everything. It has allowed me look at this lifestyle in a whole different light. I'm glad you added that in there.
You have a beautiful gift, and I really encourage you to write more stories. They will not only bring people pleasure and satisfaction as a reader, but, if their minds are open to it, will also teach them some very important life lessons. With this series, I know for me, you have touched my heart deeply. And for that, I thank you.
Blessings
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Thanks to you all
Your encouraging comments are appreciated!
one of the best story I had read so far
ham_sandwich , I really like your Story, from the beginning to it´s wonderful end, as you Show that you know how a respectful and caring relation shud be. You are for me a real Dom, who is not selfish, but knows, that only a happy and satisfied slave can make her Master happy and pleased to the best! Many so-called dominants shud read your story and see, what they have missed in being a Dom so far
You also are a good writer and I hope to read more from you!
For this Story you got 5 stars from me!more...
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