And we were quiet for a while, but I was thinking. Did the fact that women had to face up to the pain of childbirth mean that all women were essentially submissive, either by nature or by design, or maybe even masochistic? I didn't know, but it was certainly worth considering.
One thing I did know: Kitten was mine and I was Kitten's, and we were a family. And that made me the most blessed man in the whole effing world!
Oh, and, gentle reader, just in case you were wondering? We did live happily ever after.
We really did!
(the end)
*****
Thanks to my readers for the many stars they've given out for this series. It was a fun, fulfilling story to imagine and to put into words. Perhaps someday in the distant future, long after we're all gone, a student of literature will pore through the ancient archives of Literotica in search of some submissions that are worthy of remembering, and I would hope that something that I wrote would perhaps deserve even so much as a footnote in his or her learned paper.
Thanks go out to Shysub412, a grand Irish lass, so she is, for her expert help in tweaking the good Father Oreiley's voice. Once again, she has come to my rescue! I raise a glass of Bushmills as a toast to her and wish her inspiration for her own writing and, more to the point, happiness for now and for always. Only she knows how she was honored within the depths of this tale.
Recognition in memoriam to French photographer Jeanloup Sieff (1933 - 2000) for his elegant and inspirational nudes, especially "Derriere anglaise, Paris, 1969," and for his statement recast here by Father Orielly about the female form being proof of the existence of God.
Finally, but most importantly, all my affection goes out to you, Chef Lisa, my darling, adorable, womanly wife, for the continuing support you provide to me over my writing about my strange notions about the essence of love in its many forms. I want you and everybody who ever reads this to know that you are the world to me. I couldn't do it without you, Pooky, because you're my utmost inspiration!
Peace!
-Ham_Sandwich
In So Many Ways "Delightful". 🏆
Thank you for a most enjoyable and also somewhat thought provoking read. As I stated in an earlier chapter comment, it may seem a bit strange to describe a BDSM themed story as "delightful" but believe in this case few readers would object. As for this reader, I could not think of a better word to describe this gem.more...
Thank you, JJMemaw
I'm glad you found my story to be meaningful. As a matter of fact, I just yesterday submitted a new story called "Mistresses 'R' Us," which hopefully will be posted in the next day or so. It's nowhere as deep as the "Kitten" chapters, but perhaps you'll enjoy it nevertheless. Thanks for making me one of your favorite authors!more...
Oh My!!
How wonderful to read such an amazing story! I wept, laughed, wanted to smash Pluto into bits because of his treatment of Kitten. You had me gasping and hot with want, and at the end you had me in tears as it reminded me of my husband and how he feels about me. Thank you so much, please keep writing!!more...
Thanks, Sir Galahad
One of the stories I've been working on for a while now will be in novella form rather than piecemeal chapters. Thanks so much for the kind remarks, sir!
Romantic BDSM. A rare sort of story.
While I'd prefer it put all together as a novella, it reads vey well. Gary's careful preparation for taking Kitten's virginity almost qualifies as a how- to that men should read carefully. Her initiation was lovingly handled, and I dare say many women who read this envy her.more...
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