Alex pounded her hard and fast and just as he couldn't hold out any longer he felt her nails dig in deep as she pulled him to her as hard as she could. "Oh...fuck!" she cried. "Oh...my...GOD!"
Alex released months of built-up cum from his aching balls as Kashawna cried out in ecstasy. He grunted loudly as he shot stream after stream inside his lover's pussy until there was nothing left to shoot.
Barely able to breathe, they collapsed in one another's arms.
"Oh, my God! That was the most amazing...thing...ever," she panted. "You weren't kidding," she said.
"About?" he asked.
"Making me feel better. I can't remember ever feeling this good in my entire life. That was so amazing!"
"Yeah," he said. "That's the perfect word for what just happened. Amazing!"
"I'm so happy I could cry again," she said as she continued to hold him. "I feel like I've hit the jackpot! You're so handsome, so caring, such a good dad, AND you're amazing in bed."
"Well, I just did hit your honeypot," he teased.
"Mmmm. I know. And how nice was that?" she purred. "Hey...are you ready to hit that again by any chance?" she said smiling at him. When she felt him growing inside her again she said, "Is that a 'yes'?"
He didn't answer. He just smiled and began making love to his beautiful fiancee again.
Six months later, when both divorces were final, they took a long weekend and flew with Allie to Las Vegas where they were married and spent a few days in a five-star honeymoon sweet before heading home.
Deshaun was released from jail around the same time, but never even tried to re-enter Kashawna's life. Alex's business thrived and he continued his lifelong study of karate-do while Allie finally had a loving mommy to be her new best friend and role model. Life was finally once again a very good thing.
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I thought it was just an excellent story.
Tough subject matter, but handled in the best way...Five Stars!
I thought it was a fine story with such a subject matter well handled!
Sometimes you have to set a stage with less than desirable conduct to get to where you want to go. I am a big fan as I have said before, so just keep entertaining me...among many others!!!
Pacing and Domestic Violence
If I'm really lucky, someone will cry "you're overly sensitive!" or tell me to grow thicker skin when no comment has ever offended me. Replying to them doesn't indicate thin skin. It implies bemusement. I simply find the negative comments amusing or absurd and all too often--both. 'What purpose do they serve?' is my question to you who make them.
I often burst out laughing when I read them wondering if the person making the comment knows how silly the comment sounds. Let's assume the comment is accurate or even spot on. How does making it change anything? It won't change the published story and people like me will never change the way they write to please some individual. These comments lead me to believe the person making them honestly sees himself as some kind of wise sage offering a little much-needed advice without knowing a thing about the person who wrote the story. Perhaps they just feel compelled to say _something_, no matter how inane it may be.
That's why I never comment on anyone else's story. It's their story. They took the time to write it and they put themselves out there to publish it. If I like it, I give either 4 or 5 stars. If I don't, I move on without rating it or commenting. So when I read these kinds of comments, I always wonder why the commenter made them. (I don't _really_ care, of course. I just find it all very entertaining.)
Pace-car drivers: Shouldn't you publish at least--oh, I dunno--a half dozen stories of your own before opining? I go to your bio page and look to find your stories so I can learn all about proper pacing from an expert and what do I find? Nothing! Or maybe 2-3 stories in another category. How are we novice, non-pacers supposed to learn from the best when the best don't even have any examples of perfection to offer us?
As to the comment on domestic violence, what in the world does F on M domestic violence have to do with the fact that men _should_ NEVER hit women? Does that make it any less true?
The truth is men should NOT hit women, and saying it in no way reduces or mitigates (let alone excuses) violence against men. Both are wrong. Focusing on one doesn't lessen the seriousness of the other. By doing so, you're making a false comparison. What you might have said is something like this: "I agree wholeheartedly with your MC as men shouldn't ever hit women. I would also add that women should also not hit men even though that has nothing to do with your story." Okay, but even then, is there anyone who doesn't know that women can be violent or that they too, kill people? At least that would make sense. What you wrote did not unless, of course, you honestly believe you're one of the only people who knows that. Is there anyone who hasn't watched a crime story show on TV and seen how abusive women can be? Does anyone over 21 not know what the term 'black widow' means? So...seriously?more...
Sorry could not finish
Your story was well put together and really thought out but I could not finish when your MC started going on his white knight kick about how men should never hit a woman. It upsets me when I think that of the 12 people so far this year that died in austrailia from doestic violence 8 were men or how that man in the UK had to wear make up to his wedding because his then finace would beat the shit out of him and she would later stab him....or my brother who as we grew up was told never hit a woman even when his wife shot him for leaving her. It is not just you so many people out there assume that when it comes to domestic assult its a man problem and not a people problem not taking into account that the most viloent relationships statistically are lesbian relationships.
Anyway it just made it really hard to get behind the characters for me. Also your pacing was too quick I think there could have been a lot more done with them.more...
Really
I do really like the story but, three and a 1/2 pages. They make love and then it's over the end. I'm sure you could find a better way to end this story that was so good till the middle of page 4.
still gave it a 4 for the first three pages.more...
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