Saving Sabrina Ch. 01

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Andy watched as she struggled to keep it together and broke his heart. This beautiful woman was carrying more than anyone should ever have to and he could read every moment of her pain and suffering in the bright green eyes that were locked onto his, filling with tears. He knew his sister and hers had done the best they could supporting her through this but as he watched those tears begin to roll down her cheeks, it hit him that wanted, and needed, to be the one to help her.

When Sabrina saw Andy step forward and reach for her, everything she'd been bottling up inside since that awful day she opened the first package surged out of her. Without thought, she rushed towards him, wrapped her arms around his strong body, and wept.

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AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Great setup I was pulled in right away.

arrowglassarrowglassabout 6 years ago
Great start...got my attention!

I see there is a Ch. 02, so I won't waste any time getting to it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Great start next part as soon as possible please.

Lord_Dane81Lord_Dane81about 6 years agoAuthor
Got edits back for Chapter 1...

So I'll be uploading an edited version of this soon. Just gotta get some time to correct it.

kdlucaskdlucasabout 6 years ago
Great Start

I just found this story and really enjoyed it. I only noticed a few errors in the grammar department, so you'll not have much clean up to do. I can't wait to read chapter 2! Thanks!

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