Savior, Alpha Ch. 07

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Her demeanor was a bit quiet, less social than the others. She kept to herself mostly, only playing occasionally with the others.

Anne tried to bring her in, bring her closer. She gave Diana extra attention, trying to soften her personality. She had ended up weaning her early as nursing her was so uncomfortable because of the biting. She felt guilty about that. She kept trying to compensate.

It was the following summer and Diana was approaching her first birthday.

She didn't understand all of what had happened but had heard some things. Since she was quiet and everyone had trouble smelling her she had been able to sneak into conversations she really shouldn't have heard.

She knew her mother was Alpha but she found out that her mother had survived a concerted attack while carrying her and had been hurt badly. Discovered that her mother wasn't even a true wolf, but her father was. That there were others who were unhappy with her.

Diana kept to herself even as the others tried to include her. And Rose wouldn't call her by her name. She called her Sissy, which she hated. One day she was outside running around when Rose dropped the stuffed wolf that Anne had made. Diana scooped it up and took off. Rose went after her.

It took a bit, but Rose caught her sister and took ahold of her toy, and pulled.

Diana refused to let go. Rose pulled again and Diana pulled back. Rose growled and Diana growled back.

Ethan happened by as the two were fighting. He watched, briefly, to see how things would resolve between his daughters. As Diana bit down and pulled harder, and the toy came apart, Ethan was surprised to see Rose's eyes glow amber.

Fin

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Finish??

More coming up? The ending seems to be not ended yet

ChasingtheSkyChasingtheSkyover 6 years ago

I love your writing, and I look forward to the next story.

Iread2relaxIread2relaxover 7 years ago
Of course her eyes glowed amber.

That brat broke her doll. Diana seems to be the darkside. We need to watch her. Great chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I'm confused

about the story arc because it doesn't seem balanced.

Was it about Anne recovering from her trauma? With the effort spent on the challenge and its aftermath, it felt like the recovery was not really resolved.

On the other hand, was it about the beginnings of a disaffected new wolf? If so, you may have spent too much effort on the recovery process. Cliffhangers don't work well unless it is the main story arc that is suspended and there is the promise of a future resolution.

Otherwise, this has been a very enjoyable series.

Wolftight21Wolftight21over 7 years ago
Hope.

I am looking forward to your next storyline but I do hope you'll continue this one, lot's of interesting stuff can still happen and some neat thing's are developing. Oo.

As for how you ended Savior, Alpha - it was an unexpected ending and it allows for the storyline to continue.

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