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Still buried deep within me, he wrapped his arms tightly around me, dropping light kisses on my hair. I wasn't prepared to move for a week at least. The feel of him against and inside me felt so wonderful, I wanted to savor it for as long as I could.
"Are you okay Sara?" he asked gently.
"Ooohhh yes," I murmured, caressing his chest. "Lucien?"
"Yes love?"
"Can we do this again?"
He chuckled softly when he heard my question.
"As often as you wish. But not just yet, I don't want you to get too sore."
I felt him pulling away from me and held him tighter, not wanting to let go. "Don't go Lucien" I cried softly, "Not yet."
"We need to get cleaned up," he explained.
"Later. Please?" I pleaded.
"Whatever you say love," he agreed and we snuggled close to each other.
I woke up some time later, wrapped in a feeling of such bliss and contentment. Lucien had slipped out of me and discarded the condom and I found to my surprise, he'd cleaned me up as well. I'd slept through the entire thing.
Turning to face him, I propped myself on my elbow and looked lovingly at his sleeping form. I was bursting with so much happiness, it felt like I'd died and gone to heaven. Lucien, my wonderful, beautiful, caring man, he was the stuff of dreams!
When I thought of the way he'd made love to me, I wondered with a pang of jealousy just how many women he's had to be such a wonderful lover and immediately scolded myself over that uncharitable thought. Whatever was in Lucien's or my past, was just that -- past, and shouldn't make a difference to either of us. I was finally moving on with my life and Lucien was going to be a big part of my present and my future.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoI loved this series it was so sweet, however, the only problem in the story was not in the plot, but rather the construction. You spelled, capitilized, and punctuated everything correctly, but you kept switching narrators, which is not a bad thing it just began to be confusing when it went from first to third person so many time. Alot of authors on literotica do, indeed, switch narrators within the same story, but not usually between third and first person, and when they do switch which character is thinking and speaking they usually use *** or -------- (etc.) to break it up and give it flow. Also, your paragraphing was a bit off in my opinion, however, that is mostly left up to the authors discretion, so don't pay too much attention to it. Your plot and character developement was superb! All in all minor mistakes if you can even really call them mistakes. Great series, keep up the good work! :)
Anonymousabout 14 years agoI absolutely loved this story!!!! It made me tear up at the end and I totally love that!!!! You are very talented. Please keep writing!!!
Anonymousover 19 years agoPlease continue on with this story and dont let the other non-writers get you down. I loved the story, and I can understand how love can just hit you sometimes and it doesnt matter how mad at them you are because you love them. Sara may have been a strong person, but I believe that you made her a stronger person when she let her guard down enough in this story to actually see the love that Lucien has for her. I hope that you will continue it and take the critizism that others give you in small doses and not in large ones because after all this is your story and not theirs.
Anonymousover 19 years agoA guy can only put up with so much with not even a glimmer of hope and Lucien the saint had his breaking point, asserting his right to know where he stood. I found it believable, I must disagree with the last comment -- Sara learned to trust and not use the past as an excuse to stop happiness in the present.
