Season of Firsts Ch. 01

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The blast of cold air hit my face with the force of a speeding car colliding with a brick wall. Yet somehow, I managed to force myself to stick my head out the window and call down to the group of men below, exchanging a few quick words to let them know that Megumi and I were doing fine but really only had enough food to last until dinner unless the electricity made a return. One of the men called up to me to confirm that they were heading to the north-side door, and that arrangements had been made to set us up in a hotel in a nearby town until further notice.

After closing the window, Megumi and I finished packing, then took our suitcases and Felicia's laptop to wait near the north-side door.

As we stood in the stairwell by the door, we held each other close, our breath plainly visible in the air. Yet neither of us seemed to notice, however, for we were finally about to be rescued.

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HiFrancHiFrancover 2 years ago

That was wonderful! I’m looking forward to the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
A Classic

This is the best story on Lit describing the brain's role in sex. The protagonist is so well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

This is the best of the submissions I've read so far. It is well written and you've taken your time to build the relationship's progress. Excellent, I look forward to the rest. :)

WFEATHERWFEATHERover 16 years agoAuthor
More Forthcoming in the Next Few Days

I believe this is the first time that I have commented here on a comment to one of my stories or poems, but I felt I should inform everyone that the entirety of the story (three chapters) has already been submitted to Literotica. There is a rule in place that only one chapter is posted per day, so Chapter 2 should be posted Monday, and Chapter 3 posted Tuesday.

ms.readms.readover 16 years ago

very hot. I wish you could write faster. I loved the makeout/sex? scene between the two characters. very descriptive, you made me feel like I was there in the room with them. I can't wait for chapter two.

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