Esther took hold of Rylum's arm. Together they walked towards the door. No use hurrying. Good thing since her heels were designed to give her a sexy wiggle rather than speed. Warkan's back was still turned, his hand working Signe faster now. Esther thought she could hear the blonde moan. God knows she should be able to recognize the sound. Maybe, though, she just imagined it. The typical party background noise made it hard to tell. In the end, what difference did it make? Either way, Esther wasn't looking back.
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needs tweaking
Need to read almost 3 pages before getting a bit of an idea what this story is about. Lots of moaning and patting about, but if the who/what/where/how/when is clear in your head, you need to make it clear for your readers as well. Preferably not at too slow a pace. Tweak, tweak, tweak, or someone with experience to do it for you.more...
Great!
This story is really fun, please continue!
And ignore that silly first comment. I loved that line, it got the point across perfectly. I'm sick of political correctness! It's your story. If someone wants to take offense let them! My God, this story is about women being sex slaves! And she decides to get righteous and offended over a comment about special ed teachers?? Get a grip lady! And get off your high horse!more...
A fun story
Please write more. I'd like to read more of Esther's adventures.
Exceptional!
Very cleaver. I'm looking forward to reading more
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I liked it
Quirky, different, sassy and with my sense of humour.
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