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She bucked into. "Oh! Yes. It's been too long," she said. Her eyes closed and her head fell as she concentrated on the fullness and the wonderful stretching that only a man's hard dick can do.
Adam said, "Yes, too long my love. Fuck! I've missed you!"
The pair continued to delight in screwing each other. They hit their stride just like they did in the old days and they climaxed passionately and simultaneously.
Sadie and the girls walked through the village. Sadie said, "Today seems to be Eve's day. Can tomorrow be mine? Seriously, I must have set the world record for the longest dry spell!"
"Sure thing, Snapper," Sara to her mom. Then she laughed.
- COMMENTS
cindyp1976about 1 year agoit was really good but I do think it would have been better if the other two women hadn't been killed and if there were more survivors like military men and women that work in underground facilities like Cheyenne mountain and others around the world and if they worked in those facilities they wouldn't have been exposed to the gas that made men sterile. I also think that it would have been better if they had found Adam after just a couple of years instead of 18.
Anonymousabout 3 years agoi agree with the comment about you needing an editor, or at least a proofreader. the errors were distracting. that said, the premise was good and carried out nicely. i dont agree with those who said there would be more divers surviving. there would however be hundreds of US Navy submariners returning from deployment. i doubt the EMP you used to take out all the vehicles would effect them.
Anonymousover 3 years agoYou really needed an editor. For a story this long, you had many, many, many errors. From misspelled words, to using the wrong words, to using the wrong tense for a word, to using juvenile words to describe body parts, an editor that knew what they were doing would have made this a much better story. 3 stars at best. And, no, this is NOT one of the best stories on the site. It’s mediocre and borderline boring. Now I’m off to read more of your tripe to see if you got better with practice.
gfrhover 4 years agoOne of the best stories on this site. Not just another one page jerk off that's mostly on this site. Keep up the great work.
ausvirgoover 6 years agoThe story was interesting, and I like how you avoided having Adam and Eve hook up too soon.
One glaring error though (apart from the number of divers in the Keys already mentioned - that discrepancy was necessary for the story), and that is that having an ANNUAL dipping ceremony is ridiculously inefficient. Women become fertile monthly, and the monthly cycles for a whole village would be unlikely to synchronize. Plus, men produce sperm continuously, not once a year. Any group smart enough to come up with the dipping technique would have made it a ritual spread over the week of each woman's maximum fertility in each month. Probability of pregnancy increased approximately 100 times over an annual dipping ceremony.
