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The pressure was getting to be too much to take. I sat up a bit more so my cock was right in her face. The head was so swollen it was practically shining. My mouth hung open as I gasped for breath. I was losing control of myself, starting to drool a bit. My toes were curling up involuntarily. "I'm gonna cum, Katja... I'm... gonna..." I felt myself start to spasm, and looked down to watch a long thin line of semen spurt up into her hair. She jumped a little. She had never seen a man cum before, and I think it scared her. Not to mention that I was cumming so hard it felt like I was going to hurt myself. It felt like anti-aircraft fire. I shot another stream into her golden hair. My cum looked beautiful there, it hung like jewelry. The third stream was stronger still, and it arced up in the air and shot right over her shoulder. This time she didn't back away. She was fascinated by it all completely enrapt. I spurted several more times, less strongly now, and it licked the bottom of her chin, and dribbled out over my stomach. By this point she was covered with my cum. It was splashed across her hair and it was dripping down her neck. A little dollop had even somehow landed on her bottom lip, and now her tongue tentatively poked out to see what semen tasted like. I was still shuddering, and little bubbles of cum were still dripping out of my cock. It was an immense orgasm.
"I came a lot," I told her, stating the obvious. I was laughing now. The release was euphoric.
"I'm glad, that was fun" she said, wiping the cum off her face and neck. I ran my finger through it and drew little circles around her nipples.
"Next time," I said, "we'll go all the way." It was a statement, not a question. A look halfway between anticipation and panic crossed her face.
"We vill see" see said.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 year agoWell, it's not up to the USA Trilogy but it's all right.
C'mon now, show some imagination! I mean, how about JohnTresPassos? That shows that you're somewhat familiar with the guy, while also making it into a joke.
As for me, I'm amused to write the first comment in 17 years, which I'm pretty sure will never be read.
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoNice job. This is very good for a first story, keep it up. If you want to avoid some of the complaints I've read, submit the next one to an editor, they can help and do this to make stories better, not change them. They will fix grammer, math, and spelling, while coaching you on technique. Your character development and story flow are pretty good, so this should be minor. Have fun with your next one.
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoFirst, you say she's 26. Then, when she says she hasn't kissed a guy in 6 years, you say 'you haven't kissed a guy since you were 18??"
Later you say she's 25, then say her great kissing is the result of 8 years of build up.
The most disappointing part was how you finally got her naked. You spend so much telling about groping, trying for feels, reaching into her bra. Then, out of nowhere, one night 'she was naked in my bed'. HUH?? How about a few lines about HOW you finally got her naked.
tinakristinaalmost 18 years agowhat a sweet, sexy story! i wish every woman could give her virginity to such a patient, sensitive guy.
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoI liked your build up and you've left us waiting for the next episode.
