"I got distracted, lost track of time. I'll be there for Christmas as far as I know. If I can afford a ticket, no I do not have a job yet."
"Alright. Call me later. Sounds like you don't want to talk now" she says.
"Yeah. I'm upset. I feel stupid. I'll call you later, or tomorrow" I tell her.
He's still on the phone, I can hear him talking. I know I shouldn't listen, but I do.
"I know, but I can't deal with this right now. I had to get away, it was the best thing for me to do. We need to be apart right now" he says.
I can only guess who he's talking to.
"I don't know what I want. Do you know what you want? Do you want it all to be over?"
Wow I really shouldn't be listening.
"I can't do this on the phone. And not now anyway, I don't know what to say. I don't know how I feel."
I wonder what kind of mood he's going to be in after his call?
"Probably not until Monday. I'll try to be back on Tuesday."
He's quiet, the other person must be talking.
"I guess it is a week. I don't know what to say. I think this might help us. Or help us figure out what we want. I need to go. I'll try to call tomorrow. You know you can call if you need me. I love you."
Ok that was not expected. I feel really bad about being here. I don't know why, nothing is going to happen. Friends. Not even that, I've known him for a few hours. We'll have dinner then I'll go home. That's it.
He comes out of the bathroom. "Are we ready? I need some air."
"Let me grab my jacket, and then we're ready."
"Yeah I should probably get mine too. Is it cold out, I don't remember?" he asks, his sad eyes betraying the happy-go-lucky smile he wears.
"Just a little chilly, not bad... You know I can just go home if you want?"
"No. I don't want to be alone. I guess I'm being selfish. If you want to go home, I'll get you home."
"I actually would feel better being with someone tonight. Thinking about going home to my empty apartment alone is pretty depressing."
"Good. I didn't want to let you go. So fuck everyone else tonight" he says.
"So what do you want to do?" I ask him.
"Whatever. I just want your company."
"Ok. Just walk for awhile? Then go eat somewhere? Or do you want room service?"
"Let's go somewhere. We'll splurge. We're newlyweds, remember" he says teasing me.
I look over at him. He's really nice looking. I wonder what his wife looks like. Ugh I don't need to think about her. I do wonder why he's not there with her. What's going on between them.
"You're quiet, are you ok?" he asks.
"Yeah. Fine I guess."
We keep walking, neither one of us saying anything.
"You're not fine. Want to talk about it?" he asks.
I shake my head. What would I say, I'm jealous of your wife.
"Want me to take you home? Something's wrong I can tell. Have you decided I'm too needy too?" he asks.
"Is that what the problem is?"
He looks over at me. He sort of shrugs his shoulders.
"We're not going to talk about it. Remember, they don't exist tonight. It's our honeymoon, let's be happy."
Since we're within walking distance of the riverfront, I take him down there.
There's a new bar open on the landing so we go inside for a drink. Two drinks each later, we decide we really should eat something.
We start walking back towards the hotel hoping to find somewhere on the way to eat, but nothing looks very good. We decide to just eat at the restaurant in the hotel.
I drink too much. I hardly ever drink, and when I do it's just a couple drinks. I'm not like falling over drunk, but I'm feeling pretty good.
"Let's go up to our room. You need to lay down" Eddie says to me.
"Probably. I'm sorry." I stammer, finding my legs.
"For what? I'm glad you had a good time."
"I hate elevators" I tell him when we get in one to go up to our room.
"Yeah? Come here. I'll hold your hand" Eddie tells me.
He pulls me to him and puts his arms around me. I lay my head on his chest. This feels so good. I can hear his heart beat. It's very comforting.
"Hey this is our floor" he says a minute later.
I yawn. We walk to our room.
"Are you still going home tonight?" he asks me.
"I don't know. Maybe I can lay down, maybe nap for an hour, then I can go home."
When we get in the room he pulls me to him and looks at me. I get lost in his eyes.
I put my hand on his cheek. "You have the most amazing eyes. They tell me everything about you."
He smiles "Is that a good thing?"
I nod my head. "Yeah."
I lean in closer and pull him to me. So close. His lips barely brushing against mine. I can feel his breath on my mouth. I kiss him.
"Do you know what you're doing?" he whispers in my ear.
"Yeah" I say breathlessly.
This time he kisses me.
"Stay with me tonight" he says.
I smile. "Yeah."
"Let's drink the champagne" he suggests.
"Yeah. That might make this not so awkward. Or real."
"You don't want it to be real? If you feel like that, you should probably leave now."
I go over to the sofa and sit down. "I don't know what I want I guess. Can we sit and talk?"
"That's probably a good idea. Let me open the champagne too."
He gets the champagne and glasses and sits next to me. He pours us each some after he opens the bottle.
He toasts me "To our future."
I think, then tap his glass.
"Our future?" I ask.
He smiles "Yeah, we're married now."
"Oh yeah. Our future" I say and tap his glass again.
"I hope our marriage lasts a long time" he says looking right in my eyes.
We both drink our champagne, then set our glasses on the table.
"So what should we talk about?" he asks.
I put my hands on his cheeks and kiss him. I'm afraid at first he might be mad, but he is kissing me back so I guess he's ok with it.
"I like this conversation" he says when we stop kissing.
"So do I."
"I could keep this up all night" he says.
"That would be nice. Maybe I should stay tonight."
He kisses me. "I think you should."
"Can I ask you something though? Do you really want me here, or could I be anyone?" I ask him.
"I want you." he whispers breathlessly in my ear.
We kiss again. I love his tongue in my mouth. He sucks on my tongue.
His hand moves to my thigh. He just rests it there.
"Can I ask you something?" he asks.
"Yeah, anything."
"You're not here with me just because you don't want to go home alone are you?"
I can't help but smile. "No. I want to be here. I know it's wrong and I shouldn't be here, but I want to be here."
"Just for tonight, let's forget everything else. Everyone else. It's just you and me" he says and we kiss again.
"You are staying with me tonight aren't you?" he asks me.
I nod my head. "I can't go home now."
He smiles a sweet smile "You can't, why not? Is it because I'm irresistible?"
"Of course."
"I'm so glad you agreed to come with me. I feel bad that you missed your plane, but I'm happy that you did. And thanks for spilling your coffee on me" he says.
He kisses me on the lips. Lingers there for a few seconds, his lips barely touching mine. His breath on me.
He nuzzles my neck, lightly kisses it. His hand moving up my thigh. He gently strokes me, I know he can feel how wet I am. I find myself spreading my legs apart. We kiss, our tongues swirling around each other. I reach my hands up under his shirt in the back. His skin is so smooth. So warm. I push his shirt up when I reach up further, so he takes it off. He gives me a look, I know he wants me to take mine off. He reaches for the bottom of my shirt. "Not yet" I tell him.
"Tease" he says.
"No this would be a tease" I say. I have on a v neck tee shirt. I lean over closer to him, putting my boobs in his face. "Do you like these?" I ask him. I bite my bottom lip and give him an innocent look.
I stick one of my fingers in my mouth, lick it,I rub it across his lips, down his chest to his belly button. I look at him and smile. I raise my eyebrows, teasing him if I'll go further or not.
I do. I run my hand down his very hard cock. Even through his pants I can feel how hard he is. I take my hand away.
"That was a tease" I say.
"Fuck. Uh...can we finish that?"
"Did you like that?" I ask him.
He swallows loudly, "Yeah."
"Want to move to the bed?" I ask.
He nods his head. I stand up, I hold a hand out to him. He takes it. We walk to the bedroom, to the bed. We kiss. A long slow kiss. Our arms around each other.
"We should turn some music on and dance" he says.
"Yeah" I whisper.
"I don't want to let you go though, so we can just dance" he says.
He puts his hands on my hips, we dance slowly, no music just the sound of him breathing in my ear, and our hearts beating.
I spread my legs slightly so he's in between them. If it's possible his cock seems even bigger and harder.
He sits at the end of the bed, brings me to him. He lays back, I get on top of him, straddling him. I rub against his cock. It feels so good. I would be happy to just do this all night.
I take my shirt off and toss it on the floor. He reaches up and grabs my breasts, gently at first, then squeezes them slightly harder.
I start to unfasten his pants. "We need to take these off."
"Yeah" he says agreeing.
I slide off of him. I take his shoes and socks off. He unfastens his pants so I pull them off too.
I kick my shoes off, then slowly slide my jeans down my hips and off. He sits up and watches.
I walk over to him. Stand right in front, my legs open and around his legs. He grabs my ass and brings me closer, his face on my belly.
He starts taking my underwear off. He moves his hands around to my ass and gently strokes it. Squeezes it.
He runs his lips across my belly, softly kissing it. I run my fingers through his hair. It's so soft. I find myself wishing it was a little longer so I could see his curls.
He takes my underwear the rest of the way off.
"Should we get in bed?" I ask him.
He nods his head while it's laying against me.
I lean over and kiss the top of his head. "Let's get in bed."
I guess he took his boxers off before he got in bed because when we snuggle, he's naked.
"Your body feels so good next to mine. It's like I can't get close enough to you" he says.
I hug him even tighter. He gets close to me, like he's going to kiss me, but doesn't. He runs one of his fingers across my lips, then kisses me.
Kissing him makes my whole body tingle. I've been with other guys, only two, so this isn't my first time. In some way it feels like it is. Him touching me, it's like he knows how to touch me and where to touch me.
I touch him. Just touching him gives me chills.
We lay there and just touch each other, explore each other's bodies.
"I want to learn everything about you. What you like. If I do something you don't like, let me know" he says.
This feels so good. His hands gently touching me. His face buried in my neck. Nuzzling it. Soft kisses.
I run my fingers through his hair.
"You touching me gives me chills" he says.
"You have my whole body tingling" I whisper.
"I almost don't want to do anything but lay with you and enjoy your body. But then I think anything else we do will be incredible" he says.
I hold his face in my hands and kiss his perfect lips. "I think I want to do more. This is great, but I want to be closer to you."
He kisses my neck. I move onto my back and pull him with me. I wrap my legs around him.
"Eddie" I quietly say.
"Yeah. I know. I want you so bad too. I'm afraid it's not going to be perfect, and I really want it to be."
I reach up and caress the back of his neck. "It will be perfect."
Him inside of me feels amazing. He's slow and gentle. Sweet soft kisses while we fuck. I love his chest rubbing against my nipples. I hold onto his hips, I match his movements.
I feel myself tighten against his cock when I orgasm. I've never had one while fucking before.
He cums right after I do. He looks right in my eyes. I think I see tears. I touch his cheek and smile.
He lays next to me, I roll to my side and he snuggles against my back, his arm over me. I don't think I've ever felt this calm and relaxed in my life. I fall asleep quickly.
I wake up slightly when I feel him kiss the back of my neck. I grab his hand he has over me, I bring it to my lips and kiss it.
He keeps kissing the back of my neck, my ear. I push my ass into his hard cock. He squeezes my breasts. We grind against each other for a few minutes, then he moves one of my legs forward and slides his cock in me.
I've never fucked like this. Up to now my sex life has been very vanilla. Boring old missionary style. Tomorrow is going to suck. I can't fall for a married man though. I'll enjoy him tonight, then never see him again.
He pulls my hips closer to him. I know he's cumming. His face against my shoulder. He breathes a slight moan in my ear. We fall back asleep.
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You need a different editor. This one doesn't know the difference between a comma and a period.
You got a five from me as well.
I thought it was very well written, and the build up of sexual tension was good. I normally don'd read E/C but I liked this and am looking forward to Ch. 2.
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I'm hyper-critical. I don't like the star-rate of awarding a star for crappy writing but if there's merit I'll give one or two. Generally two for writing. That takes much guts.
I give this a four.
Unless I missed it there was no conclusion to the ring. There's much foreshadowing here and I'm sure the ring will be resolved at some point!
I look forward to 2, 3, & 4.more...
I GAVE IT 5 STARS
I see no significant writing issues. I like your style. I suspect you'll go far if you want to, and keep improving. I said it before, youre way ahead of many, and I hope you go for the gusto..
Oh boy!
Don't stop now! (Urgent whisper) She frenches me, tongue thrusting. She rolls into me, placing her top leg over my hip.
I slide my hand over her mound, fingers teasing her abundant black pubic hair. My fingers glide over her moist lips, parting them at my touch. I rest my thumb on her slit, but continue to slide my fingers between her legs. She inhales sharply as I rub her anus, surprised and pleased at my dexterity. Then she begins to climax as I gently tease her hole. Just a slight pressure is all she needed. I'll save my knuckle for next time....
Just a short paragraph in response. Your writing is so sensual. You have most of us breathing heavily, waiting for the remaining pages. Some, I know, have already cumm.more...
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