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"Magnificent, Just magnificent," Peter said with a grin as he removed his hand, kissed her goodbye, and turned to leave.
Thanks to ZexWizzard for editing assistance.
This is my second story. I appreciate all the positive comments and suggestions many of you made on my first story. I hope you enjoy this sequel too.
- COMMENTS
bobhardcastle29 days agoThis one had a lot more sensuousness to it than the first Chapter had. Ii hope that means that you're getting more adept at your writing as this series goes on.
MaxDecattover 3 years agoA perfectly told and believable story. You writing is compelling and takes the reader to the scene.
ChucksSiteover 12 years agoKeep up the good work! I like the idea of a sex club with 80 members - you can write forever with this story line. Can you come up with that many situations? That'll be the challenge. I'm enjoying your stories, and #3 was even better. However, I'm a bit confused...it seemed as if Calie was thinking she needed help after her first few dates, but the first two seemed to go without a hitch...they were great! Guess I'll have to reread #3. I see you are getting that Anonymous person who insists on leaving criticism without leaving a name. I do not think Literotica should allow comments without the person signing in. Anonymous should NOT be allowed. It seems that some can never enjoy a story without being picky. Personally, I'm grateful that people like you will take the time to write a good story for all of us to enjoy. Thanks!
Anonymousover 13 years agogreat read. take your time on the next one. dont try to top it by being unrealistic.
