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"I feel it, ohhhhh, there it goes, good-bye little man," I whispered as it slipped out.
Now I could shift down to her eye level, and we kissed, softly, our first as lovers.
"That was wonderful, Jen, you know that?"
"I didn't know what I was doing," she said, a slight blush on her face.
"You never do the first time. You go on instinct, that's what makes a good lover. That and practice, of course," and I kissed her again. She giggled and snuggled into the crook of my arm, her head on my shoulder, and we drifted off as the tall candle's flame burned brightly.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 10 years agoIn the story "Nothing Between Us" Jennifer confesses to Jake that her boyfriend in college and her fooled around but that she was still a virgin. I know different authors, different takes, but if you were going to do some background with Thuy (Jennifer) you should have re-read the story to get your facts straight.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoThis is not a backstory but an alternative history. Was disappointed with the recreation of history because of your use of the backstory line. I downgraded the rating because of the lead in not really describing what you were going to do. I still enjoy your stories.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoWhy is this a chapter in your "sex club" story?? Shouldn't it be its own story since it has nothing to do with that story? Makes very little sense to me...
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoI think you meant Van Gogh, he was the one who cut off his own ear, and not Gauguin, who was more known for his sexual escapes with young girls.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoYour writing is fine. I was confused because of the switch to a different universe. "Nothing between us" was/is one of my favorite stories also. In it, Jennifer is a virgin when she gets nailed by Jake. Her prior experience included only having her breasts caressed and having given a blow job. If this was a prequel, then she would've had to have regrown her hymen between this incident and her return back to Jake. If you're not going to stick to the storyline, let a person know! If you had stayed with the storyline, it would have been 4 or 5 stars rather than the 2 given. Please keep writing though.
