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Click hereWow… any words would really give that an injustice she thought.
Eventually he got up, helped himself to the kitchen and came back with some napkins. She looked down and was amazed at all the fluids that seemingly appeared out of nowhere. There was blood and semen everywhere. He quickly attempted to wipe everything away. After he was finished he sat next to Claudia.
"So how was that he asked?" He asked as he began to message her inner thigh once more.
Claudia was left almost speechless once more as she became all too aware hand getting closer to her opening
That was incredible she managed to muster.
She felt his fingers once again explore her moisture inside, and she became very aware that his organ was growing to new proportions once more. It was ginormous she thought, and was almost surprised that he had even managed to put that inside of her. Suddenly she felt him lift her off the couch, and laid her down on the floor. With his legs she felt him spread her legs apart and with his hands she felt him fondle both of her breasts simultaneously.
Once more she heard herself moan his mouth found one of her nipples and his hand started rubbing her clit once more.
As good as it felt, she still felt incredibly sore and it still almost hurt her from being stretched out so.
She glanced a chance at his enlarged throbbing organ and said, "Please Chad? I don't know if I can handle you again."
"Is that so?"
As he said that he stopped messaging her clit and started to almost tickle the outer moisture o her folds.
In between moans she made one final plea. "Please… stop… I don't think I can do this again."
Though she was afraid, she found it impossible to voice further protest as she felt his fingers deep inside of her once more.
Soon they were both spent.
Claudia chanced a look at Chad.
"I think that was the most fun I've ever had. Thank you." She put her arms around him, nestled close to him and kissed him on the cheek.
- COMMENTS
don87654over 15 years agoA very erotic story but in reality she was raped. Did she get pregnant, too?
Sambranoabout 16 years agoI loved the theme, the wanton passion, the desire to experience what had just been a fantasy. To those who would criticize, perhaps you just didn't "get it." Great first effort.
Texas Teaseabout 16 years agoOk, so this is your first time, and there are a ton of first time errors.
For starters, please make use of the wonderful editors on this site. There is nothing wrong with using them, in fact, using them can only help you.
Large paragraphs like in your story make reading very hard, and the reader will tend to skim through your story rather than read such large chunks of verbiage.
Spelling and grammar checks will prevent simple spelling errors that detract from the overall story. Too many of these errors will encourage readers to ditch your story for something less challenging to read. You want your readers to be able to feel comfortable while reading your story, and hopefully they'll get turned on. This won't happen often when your readers are struggling to understand what you're trying to say with these errors.
One last note - when you are writing a story about a major age difference, it needs to be more extreme than four years. Think along the lines of 10 or more years difference. Such a small age difference makes you, the writer, seem very young and inexperienced. The age difference in this story is laughable.
Good luck writing again in the future. And please, remember to use an editor next time!
Anonymousabout 16 years agoNow I don't like to criticize too much but my when I read older man I was expecting at least 30!!!! 22....is "barely a man"....I have to admit I didn't read page 2 (I skimmed it)because I got bored.
Don't let all the negative comments put you off writing again though, Keep practicing and make sure you proof read it more than once. Checkl out the How To section for pointers on writing.
