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Click hereI aptly fulfilled his wish from a moment ago, still buried far inside his warmth deeply, and I could feel myself stuffing him with my own thick load, passionately finishing directly upwards into him.
The sensation was wonderful, our bodies clinging tightly in the pleasure of the orgasm.
We started to float back down from cloud nine together, and my roommate kept his arms wrapped around me, our kiss during apotheosis splitting off. He rested his head on my shoulder too, panting.
Although I was precisely as exhausted as he seemed to be, the same brilliant smile was painted on my face still. Perfectly, nothing but a thin layer of sweat had come between us this afternoon.
Reminiscent of falling raindrops, I felt the pitter-patter of my own cum dripping from my lover's gratifying body and back down onto myself, akin to an erotic expression of my emotions for him.
The rest of college was going to be exceptionally wonderful.
Raising a gentle hand up to brush against his hair, I cuddled close to him too, whispering just beside his ear quietly as my enjoyment persevered, even after we had finished making love.
Barely audibly through our shallow breathing, I spoke softly.
"I love you too, Matthew."
- COMMENTS
erotikpassionsalmost 10 years agoI failed to see how you'd turn that into a sexy, romantic and interesting piece, but you amazingly did and it's awesome.
ilovegibbsalmost 10 years agoI loved your work. It was hot, sexy, playful, cute and romantic. This is the kind of story I like. This isn't an English Literature class, contrary to Akshun Love's scathing criticism. The idea is to share your stories with all of us excited fans and keep us turned on, breathing heavy, and completely hooked. Also to keep us hanging on evey word and dying to read the next chapter or story. To quote someone else, Akshun Love is a fucktoid(and a dickhead or bitch, whichever applies). Keep us entertained and coming back for more. ;-)
Anonymousabout 10 years agoEssentially, Scatterblooded, to me the story reads like English is your second language - understandable but a bit awkward. Sounds harsh but it's just my opinion. (You may wish to dismiss the thoughts of an Anon, as others on Lit seem to do, but I felt compelled to add my two cents' worth).
Regardless, I did think the story was hot. I love these friends-become-more plotlines, especially when one or both of the protagonists change their perception of their sexuality, which I think you hinted at. I wanted to know more about the relationship of the roommates before all of this happened. Please keep writing.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoI loved this story and thought it had an amazing ending. Only recommendation
I have is for you to hurry up and make chapter two!!!
Scatterbloodedabout 10 years agoAuthorHey, thanks a lot! That's a pretty big compliment, honestly. And yes, I'll try to be more critical with my vocabulary the next time around.
Cheers!
