Shade's Destiny Ch. 08

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When the song ended I put my arm around her waist and headed back to the table. I didn't want her to get in trouble. She peeled off to get our drinks. I watched from my seat as Jeannie brought a very tired Shade back. Shade collapsed on her chair. Jeannie bent and gave her one hell of a hot kiss. She slid her fingers up Shade's leg. My hand grabbed hers. I shook my head no. She nodded. I had seen the intimate dancing. That was okay. This wasn't. Shade's head rested on my left shoulder, her eyes were closed. She didn't see Kim as she glared at a chastened Jeannie. That would be an interesting little chat! I motioned with my hand that we were going to leave. Kim nodded that she understood.

Red set the drinks on the table. I handed her my credit card and smiled. She nodded. I fished in my pocketbook for a tip, finding what I wanted. I kissed Shade and whispered that we both had fresh drinks. She slowly sat up and drank way too much of the martini. We had to get out of here. She was exhausted and drinking much too fast. I had taken several healthy sips of my vodka and cranberry and was feeling a bit of a buzz. The club used a valet parking service so leaving the car overnight wasn't an option. Unless ... red came back with the credit card slip. I signed it and motioned to her. She came around behind Shade. I handed her the slip, pen and a twenty dollar bill and whispered my request in her ear.

"Come on babe. It's time to get you home. You're so tired. We're taking a cab home. You may have had too much to drink and you're exhausted." She didn't argue. We headed toward the coat closet. Red had our coats in her hand.

"Bernadette, do you have a place where our Shade's car will be safe overnight. She's tired and I'd prefer to take a cab."

"Yes of course Destiny. Katie told me what you wanted. I'll have one of the boys flag you a cab. You have an extra set of keys I assume?" Shade nodded against my shoulder. "Okay. The car will be around back in a lighted, fenced area that's clearly marked as being the club's property. It will be there tomorrow whenever you come for it."

"Thank you so much! Have a wonderful night." I gave her a light kiss and a hug. Katie's kiss was a bit longer. The ride home didn't take very long. Shade shivered in the cab even with the coat on. Poor thing was exhausted. I paid the cabbie and we headed to the elevator. As we headed down the hall I heard music from the direction of the condo. That can't be. Shade looked at me. I shrugged. I opened the door; the lights were on, music was blaring from the sound system, and Kim and her friends were dancing – having moved furniture out of the way for their dance floor.

Shade stood in the doorway; I was behind her. Kim came scurrying to us and, after helping Shade take her coat off, pulled her into the midst of the group. I closed the door, took my coat off, kicked off my shoes, and stood watching. I couldn't help smiling. The girls crowded around Shade ... if she hadn't figured it out, this couldn't have made it more obvious. The gorgeous Honey slithered up to me, kissed me, and, taking my hand, led me to the rest of the group.

I danced. What the hell ... when in Rome right? Kim and her friends are so young. You got the feeling they could have gone on all night. Maybe, if they were in a club, they might have. Shade, on the other hand, was a basket case. My eyes told Kim what I was sure she already knew.

"Okay you guys Destiny is gonna put my big sister to bed. Shade's absolutely exhausted."

Honey spoke up. "Destiny, before you head to bed, would you two dance one last dance for us? It was so intimate, so sexy watching the two of you at the club." Kim went to the music system. Sting's 'Fortress Around Your Heart' was what she chose. It wasn't slow but we danced as if it were. I hugged her to me. The two of us alone in a crowd. I felt her tears. The words of the song didn't matter one bit ... we both knew the meaning of the title. So did Kim. Shade had broken through her fortress. I love her for it.

There wasn't a dry eye when the song ended. They all thanked us for including them in our night and said their tearful goodnights. Kim was last. Her hug was warm, her eyes wet. Shade smiled and thanked her. I kissed her and echoed Shade's sentiments. Kim whispered, "We'll let you two get some sleep and head out. I'll see you tomorrow." She smiled; we headed to the bedroom.

Author's Note: As ever, this is a flight of fantasy; completely fictitious. If there is any resemblance to anyone walking among us my apologies. Another author put it so well: "The site is free. The author is 'paid' in comments and votes." I hope you've enjoyed yet another chapter of a rather long tale. Plenty more to come!!

The poem? Nope, I didn't write it. I lift my martini glass to toast the one who did with a heartfelt "Thank you!"

Chapter Nine is going to be delayed a bit. A wretched faux pas was discovered in Chapter Eight by a very discerning, careful eye. Chapter Nine needs major surgery. Your Vixen has her work cut out for her!! Warmest holiday greetings to all, wherever you call home!! Humble, sincere thanks to all who read, comment and email. May 2013 be a very good year for us all!! ~ Vixen ~

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lameezjohnsonlameezjohnsonover 10 years ago
Nuthin but hotness in here

May i also say i heart it? Lmao. There are no words to describe the simplicity, eroticism and beauty of this chapter. Best i can do is say Chilli pepper HOT! The club, magnifique!! Lol . No two ways about it, you are talented. Salute!

beentheredonethatbeentheredonethatover 10 years ago
Yes, I Heart It Too!

What a journey for Shade and Destiny so far. Great dialogue, awesome characters and erotic love scenes, The clubbing and the "Last Dance" sure was something to behold. Another fantastic chapter

adidasgaladidasgalover 10 years ago
I HEART IT!

For the first time since reading Shades Destiny, All my attention is focused on Shade. I should be gloating at the turn of events regarding her, i disliked her so much, but now, i feel no malice towards her, just warmth. WHY? Maybe it is because she gave Destiny and Stacey an afternoon to be together (and what an afternoon it was) or is it because of her humble apologies towards Stacey, her offer to help, the party or the gift or was it simply the poem? The reason is simple: She has redeemed herself over and over again, noticeably so in this chapter. Stacey forever earned my admiration when she told Destiny their relationship has to end and that she has to focus on Shade.Their beautiful lovemaking with the lingerie used as restraints, was so arousing. I could not even get angry at Shade for her faux pas afterwards. Destiny was right to feel upset, but how was Shade to know that Destiny decided to let Stacey and Connie go? She should have told her immediately. The clubbing sure raised my temperature with Shades sexy dancing and outfit, surrounded by all those young hotties, Ughm! So Exhilarating!! *grin*. The way Destiny handled the club scene was controlled, but without humiliating or compromising Shade in anyway. I was so proud of her! The last dance before Shade and Destiny went to bed, had me also in tears, OMW! It was sooooo Sensuous. A Beautiful ending, to a Perfect chapter.

Chapter 08 made me realize: True Love CAN conquer all, Shades Destiny proved that to me!

** OUTSTANDING **

JogrindeJogrindeabout 11 years ago
Wonderful

You must have been a queen of jigsaw puzzles when you were little!! That was brilliant, I can picture the whole story as I read it! Destiny has the reins, ha ha & I love the way she done it & love Shade for the surrender with the fantastic poem! Your really heating up the pan and adding a lot of spice & ingredients!!! I especially love the way you leave door open allowing you to bring people back in or create new series form their departure points! Simply Wonderful

warriorpoet7532warriorpoet7532over 11 years ago
Never predictable

Hot , romantic, erotic, frustrating but never predictable. You seem to use previous chapters to set up a complete surprise in the next chapter.

I like that you have taken care of Stacey and you hint that Kim has some dark secrets. Although Destiny has laid down the gauntlet and said she wants a strictly monogamous relationship I hope you continue to let her explore her new sexuality and relationship status.

I feel a little disappointed that we will not be seeing much of Connie again but then again you never know with you. You write a little like a magician using distraction and altering a readers focus to slip in a very surprising plot line.

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