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Simon couldn't even blink as his mind was opened even wider for perusal. His eyes rolled back in his head and he lost consciousness. This didn't bother his attacker, the unconscious mind was easier to manipulate anyway.
Oh yes there would be payback, after all hell hath no fury...
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoBut now, I want to take a crowbar to this new villian's face. That in itself says this will be a spectacular story. Now I have to finish this pile of papers post haste so I can get back. *begridgingly heads back to the woodpile.* Well done!!!
-LL.
Tricialenover 16 years agoIt started out slow and a little confusing, but it grew into an intriging tale and now I can't wait for the rest.
My only complaint is that with all that Isabelle went thru, I am very suprised that she would so readily think of Ian in a sexual way. I can see her relying on him for comfort and safety, but not romantically or sexually, not yet. But that's just me.
Otherwise it's very good.
Anonymousover 16 years ago...Ive been totally inside your story, not untill now did I notice the cell has three unanswered calls...
Daym, you cant stop now, not here, that just cruel!
Exellent and innovative writing love the twists on, and inside the characters and their stories, the the gay scenes kinda uhm... well sat on a towel not to make a trail on my couch...
I want to read more! Woman stop prolonging the ache you're just being mean *giggles*
