"Good girl." He said. He thrusted his finger inside of her forcefully as his tongue skillfully played with her clit. Her climax was building quickly, and she screamed for more. She finally let go, and she began to relax. William felt her insides clutching onto his finger, pulsing. He felt accomplished, being the first man to ever make her feel that way, for being the first one to give her that pleasure.
Lilly laid there, ashamed. She brought her arm across her eyes and she started weeping. For the purity that was lost, for her inability to restrain herself, for allowing herself to be controlled, and for liking every moment of it. She felt William's arms around her, bringing her face close against his chest.
She opened her eyes, sniffling. His arms felt nice. Her gaze was brought to the window. Outside was the beautiful garden that she loved so much. She closed her eyes, realizing that it was already night. The last thing she remembered before drifting off to sleep was the sound of William's voice.
"I'm sorry," he said. "I couldn't control myself."
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It's a solid start
Need some more background on Lilly, but it was good. I was interested...I'm not really cool with the half rape thing unless one party is slightly coerced into wanting it and in the end don't regret it which she did...so not my forte, but other than that pretty good.more...
Strong Beginning
It has definite potential and I look forward to reading the next chapter, but you could use a good editor to clean it up a bit. Try the volunteer editors for the site!
Excellent Story
I hope you will continue the story. Its very engaging, well written and has a hidden romance flavor to it.
i hope there is more I hope hes nice to her and she tells him off at same time its been awhile since I read a non con story where the guy is sorry but do what a happy ever after for them as well please have moremore...
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