Shedding Spite

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Maybe I have grown ... a little.

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CruachanCruachan9 months ago

I like the threads of your stories but exchanging the names of the players is confusing and having the MC in the first person and then in the third person in the same sentence is off putting. 2 Op Banners and an extended tour at MPH mean I can relate to Overwatch and I enjoyed Jack and Diane. Get an editor, there are a lot of volunteers on Literotica and keep up the good work.

MasterKoteMasterKotealmost 2 years ago

Pretty good, but the ex got off scott free

OlgreyfoxOlgreyfoxalmost 2 years ago

I actually didn't understand any of the story except the divorce part because the wife was a slut.

RanDog025RanDog025over 2 years ago

Very well done! Worth every bit of 5 BIG STARS!

mmbny47mmbny47over 3 years ago

Nice story but as an American I didn't understand one word about the games. Pitch? like in throw???

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