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"Good morning Ms. Padilla!" I practically sang as she regarded me from her small group of friends.
"Excuse me; but where do I know you from?" She replied in her robotic monotone as my face broke and I nearly teared up in front of her. Malaya didn't wait for me to answer as she and her group of equally nerdy friends walked into the school giggling and chatting.
"Nowhere." I finally choked out the words realizing that she didn't feel the same way I did after the previous day. She'd used me as a sex toy again and I was lost in a sea of emotion unfamiliar to me up until this point. I trudged off into school and the first of my classes.
I had practice later that day.
...to be continued.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 9 years agoThe plot was good, but could have had more details by the end with them sleeping. Also, you need to revisit semicolon usage. They are stronger than a comma but weaker than a period. Also, a comma is needed before names: "Let's go to bed, Malaya." Not " Let's go to bed Malaya." The 1st sentence is directed to Malaya, the 2nd a command to a group to go to a bed named Malaya. Good work overall.
