Showstopper Ch. 04

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"They're going down to the showers," a voice inside Cathy's head noted with a metallic echo.

Right then Cathy felt the pull of an internal compass she'd never experienced before turn her in the direction of the young couple as they disappeared out of sight.

Her feet seeming to pivot on their own, without even looking Cathy stuffed her notes into the mail basket hanging beside her office door before taking her first step towards the far hall...

THE END

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
BRAVO!!

From the first chapter, it was a "can't put it down" read. Fun characters, great writing and lots of wet, hot sex. As a gal who's enjoyed a somewhat less exciting love life than your main Showstopper, I loved losing myself in the fantasy. More! More1 More!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
My My Hey Hey...

Just got home from work and checked the feedback from the finale...

To everyone who enjoyed the series..my heartfelt gratitude...the next series is already in the works..

To the few who didn't (and made their objections known)....after trying to get over how initially incoherant those feedback posts seemed, I guess it finally dawned on me that I should take that as a compliment. If someone is going to be so distastefully affected by a work of fiction (let me say that again..a work of FICTION) that came straight out of my imagination, then I guess I didn't quite know my own power...especially since those same precious few folks keep saying they'll never read my stuff again yet with each new submission they somehow find their way back..

Great weekend everyone,

SC

drdoom39drdoom39almost 15 years ago
Hot.

Really liked your story + was sorry to see it ended so soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
A selfish DOG bitch in heat.

You don't need women like this. They are no good to anyone including themselves.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
did not like

the woman carachter. her transformation was just from a selfish asshole to a cheating selfish asshole and that is kind of not to much. nothing around her counts or is mentioned more than in one sentence. work, her family, friends (real friends). she also does not intend on working to change her partnership to a better one, no. it's all about her and her sexual needs and her own so called pride.

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