"We will have our date tomorrow." Sian whispered into Lilly's right ear. "After our date, we will come home and..." She hesitated.
"And what?" Lilly nervously asked.
"And we can do whatever you like. I... I want you." Sian said in a whisper, "I love you Lilly."
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Chapters 1 and 2 are perfect, well almost. Maybe a little too much detail in the furniture stuff, but the plot,storyline and how the sisters go about seducing one another is spot on. As they would say in printed books, 'a real page turner'. I loved the 'cliffhanger' at the end. Eagerly anticipating Chapter 3. Keep up the story. PLEASE?more...
Thank you!
Thanks everyone for the comments so far, I am already writing chapter 3 and it will be out soon... probably. Christmas is coming after all.
Keep the comments coming please, the feedback is great help.
Crap
Left us high and dry with that ending, I was getting into the story when you just stopped.
Now with my bitchng over I loved your story, girl/girl sex is so hot.
Hell no leave the 14 year old out of it, it's a sure way to get kicked off here, older sister maybe but not brother.more...
And then...
Cons: switching between present and past tense.
PROs: everything else. The previous commenter missed the disclaimer that it was a longer story. I love the romance mixed with the lust, and would dearly like to read more. Great so far.more...
Really good story
It was a really good story! It made me so wet! But can you add the older sister in the sex story somehow? Cause it would be really hot! And it would be really hot if you added all the sisters in! Even the 14 year old :)more...
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