Sian and Her Twin Sister Ch. 04

byJust_The_Guy©

She might have blacked out at some point. Sian wasn't quite sure as she was still aware of what happened around her but cannot remember seeing it. Next thing she knew was being rushed to the hospital in an ambulance. Lilly was sitting next to her, as she lay on a gurney. A couple of... ambulance people, Sian couldn't think of their name at that point, were fussing around. She could feel some things attached her body that were connected to stuff. The world started going really blurry and then blackness. The last thing before the blackness was complete was her twin sister crying her eyes out.

"'ll be awrite..." Sian mumbled.

To be continued...

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by Anonymous03/08/15

Please hurry up with the next chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens next

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by Wolfeager02/12/15

5 stars

I'm loving the story so far and I can't wait to read what you'll come up with, now I do hope that everything turns out well for the twins.

P.S. A bit of editing wouldn't hurt either ;)

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by Just_The_Guy02/02/15

From the Author... Me.

Thanks for all the comments.
I will occasionally update my bio with news about the next chapter and things like that, so be sure to check every now and then.

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by Anonymous01/15/15

Expansion?

Nice story...going well...appears to be some potential for expansion there as the little sister helping to care for the twin once she comes home....or perhaps some expansion on the dream the twin had aboutmore...

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by curiousvisitor01/13/15

Just don't cripple her, please...

I have read too many sad ending stories lately.

They are beautiful and heartrending, but they still make me sad.

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