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The Gold King nodded, "I hope he is as impressive in person as you make him out to be."
She smiled, "He will be, with no coaching from me."
She left a lot out on Eldar. She wanted the Gold King impressed and Bahumut wanted that as well because he was impressed with this elven champion. She was not a champion to Bahumut but she was a hidden hero of his. She did not have the powers given to champions, she just ensured she gave a voice to his ideas without calling him out directly.
- COMMENTS
EmotionalStorm11 months agoAuthorChapter 24 and 35 are the largest chapters. Below is a rough breakdown by chapter on the word counts.
Chapter 1 6900
Chapter 2 6700
Chapter 3 12200
Chapter 4 9700
Chapter 5 6200
Chapter 6 5400
Chapter 7 10950
Chapter 8 3650
Chapter 9 6550
Chapter 10 8550
Chapter 11 6750
Chapter 12 6750
Chapter 13 5650
Chapter 14 13650
Chapter 15 12400
Chapter 16 23000
Chapter 17 16150
Chapter 18 13800
Chapter 19 12600
Chapter 20 7200
Chapter 21 24200
Chapter 22 18350
Chapter 23 29700
Chapter 24 47400
Chapter 25 30850
Chapter 26 7000
Chapter 27 7150
Chapter 28 18050
Chapter 29 22850
Chapter 30 9200
Chapter 31 24500
Chapter 32 6200
Chapter 33 6300
Chapter 34 22400
Chapter 35 53000
Chapter 36 18,800
This was my freshman story; the first I wrote for this site. Working to keep the size more consistent across chapters I found to be a challenge as you can see. This is why future books were submitted wholly or in parts. The re-write of book 3 will cause it to be released in 2 parts. The shorter chapters are generally more focused on a specific event in this effort.
kyotie91311 months agoLike the title stated but still a very good chapter. I await the next chapter with baited breath
