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Click here"And if we constantly leave messages during our trips to the Run..." 32 continued, catching on quick.
"Maybe we can get one of them to take notice," Noah said. "They'll spread it around really quick to everyone else." He punched one hand into the other, then faltered. "But how would they get a message back to us?"
"One thing at a time," 32 said.
"Right. What kind of messages should we be leaving, and how should we leave them?"
32 grinned, and it was the first full-bodied smile he'd seen on her face. With her pale skin and the metal bits in her neck flexing with the motion, it was decidedly unnerving. "I've got a few ideas..."
- COMMENTS
L0vatover 1 year agoI have to admit this is a really fascinating story you are writing. I don't find it that arousing but man is it interesting. I am very curious where you will go with it.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoAll four chapters have rated 5 stars. Haven't read anything else you've written, but that will change this week. Fantastic story idea with very good character development. I'm just hoping that this story gets finished, sadly, there are many 5 star stories on the site that just died out half way through.
Amazing job so far, now I'm off to check your other offerings.
Anonymousabout 5 years agoEnjoying the character development. Making the primes seem more human. I wonder if Noah will get any abilities because all the other primes have special abilities?
Story is awesome, looking forward to the next chapter
Guenhwyvarabout 5 years agoI’m thoroughly enjoying the effort you’re putting into the character development and world building! Well done in getting the reader to invest in the protagonist.
Looking forward to more (hopefully longer, though this wasn’t ‘short’ by any stretch of the imagination - just greedy) chapters!
Cheers,
Dennis
