Sinner's Run Ch. 05

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"Right..."

Quirrel spun the pistol around on his finger, holding it out to Noah. "Give it a go, eh?"

Noah took the gun back and copied Quirrel's posture. It felt so much more natural than what he'd been attempting before, yet he never would've thought to try it like this. His first shot went wide, but the second struck the target in the shoulder. "Ah!"

"Nothing to it," Quirrel drawled.

Noah managed to hit the target once more as he fired the rest of the rounds. A pitiful hit/miss ratio, but better than nothing. He looked to Quirrel. "Thanks. But why help me."

Quirrel looked at him for a while, something decidedly dark in his gaze. Then he simply smiled and patted Noah on the shoulder. "Just trying to keep things interesting. And maybe make you someone that I actually have to try to take down out there." His smile turned feral, his grip on Noah's shoulder becoming a vise. "Otherwise what's the fun of it all, eh?"

With that, he dropped his hand and left the firing range, leaving Noah alone with an empty pistol and a stack of empty magazines. He swallowed. Somehow, even though Nala's the one who openly hates me, that guy terrifies me even more.

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NathanRavenwoodNathanRavenwoodalmost 5 years agoAuthor
Thanks everyone!

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ArcTalyxArcTalyxalmost 5 years ago
Great story

The character development is really good, and keeps me interested to see who we get to know next. Keeping it all tied together with the mysterious plot keeps me on edge waiting for the next chapter.

Storm113Storm113almost 5 years ago
Excellent!

Great story, keep it up! Thank you for your work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Keeps getting better.

Really good chapter, this series is going strong.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Keep'em coming.

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