Given enough time, my hair was free-flowing and covering my shoulder blades, the ties and pins added to the basket. I was then instructed to remove my jewelry; the youngest Red Sister held out the basket so I could drop them among my other effects. The eldest Sister stepped behind me and combed her fingers carefully through the white tresses several times; I knew she was searching me, but it felt good in a way and I sighed to ease some of my tension.
Then I felt her gloved hand on the back of my neck, applying pressure. "Be so kind as to take hold of your ankles, Sirana."
I nearly spun around; the muscles in my pelvis flexed protectively as I understood that she had one more search to do. She squeezed my neck hard, prevented me from turning, and roughly forced me to bend over. She kicked at my ankles like a beast of burden to get me to widen my stance, so my toes would touch the side points of the diamond. I'd honestly seen plenty of males placed in this position. I'd even ordered it; it was fun, it was humiliating, especially for the reluctant ones.
Not so fun when it was me, and probably meant to be more humiliating.
"Take hold of your ankles, Sirana. Don't make me say it a third time."
My hands grabbed at their instructed purchase, and I tried explaining, "I don't have anything inserted right now, Red Sister."
She ignored me. I felt the soft leather of her gloved fingers trace my sex; she was gathering what moisture there was. It wasn't a lot; I believe I was still too scared. She pressed a finger into me and I cringed at the discomfort as she felt around inside, satisfying herself that there wasn't any foreign object currently stored in my birth canal. One could be surprised how often there was in any given Drow; I couldn't blame this Sister for checking, or for being thorough.
This accepting attitude also allowed me to anticipate that she would check my third orifice as well, so I didn't tighten up at the first probe to where it would only hurt me if she had to force it in. Instead I relaxed, allowed the digit to penetrate me more easily. It wasn't slick enough and was very uncomfortable, painful, but it also didn't last very long. I breathed a sigh of relief when she withdrew.
"Good, Sirana. Good. Now get on your knees and spread them out. Touch your feet together. Now hands on the stone, bring your palms together, elbows out. Touch your forehead to your hands, keep your eyes down. Make yourself fit the diamond, imagine you are a spider waiting in her web.
"Now, continue to wait until we return."
I heard no snickering as I complied and it did make me wonder... There was no additional pat or touch, no final, pointless insertion from her. They weren't just playing with me?
She—and they—glided away. And I waited.
(continued)
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Wonderful
Absolutly wonderful! Its obvious just from this first chapter, that you strongly have plot in mind, and a direction and conclusion that you plan to head. And to me, it is that, which is most important. I see to many stories on here that have wonderful writing, even great stories, but lack the sense of direction it got from this chapter. I know just from that, that this story would be completed(regardless that I've already seen it has, and you've moved on to sequels XD). I know it's hard to achieve that(I've got 2-3 plot lines I refuse to start/post until I do have a solid conclusion in mind for them) so this isn't a rip on others but more a 'tipping of my hat' to what you've achieved.
However slight it is, now for the negative. I prefer longer stories. At least a full 2 pages on this site, and preferably 3-4. Again I know how hard this is, but I'm the kind of person that will devour through a three to five hundred page book in a 1-3days depending on my other responsibilities. So when I am reading through stories on here, the longer the better as I get to enjoy it longer, especially in most cases when a started series isn't finished, and I'm left with a sense of lacking.
So while I hope your chapters do get longer. I hope more that you will continue to write more. And that you don't just disappear like so many of the other good authors on this website, that leave with out even a word.....Also if you could at least give a horrible conclusion to any unfinished stories for us to rage at XD. I hate cliff hangers when I know there wont eventually be a resolution :Pmore...
@pobrat, no worries
Forgiven, don't fret about the mis-tap. :) It happens. You know I'll keep writing this series regardless of the score on the first story (when "Subterrane" wasn't even a gleam in my eye yet, let alone "Sufferance."). Thanks for reading and leaving a nice comment, I'm glad you're enjoying everything. I'm almost finished with the latest chapter, very close!more...
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE IT!!!!
I really screwed up and somehow only gave you 2 stars! Jeeze, I favorite the story and went to give you 5, ah! Please forgive!! I hit 'report this story' tab, and explained the problem and asked that they fix it. Here I was actually hoping to put you past 4.50 on the first chapter (then I saw how many votes you already have and realized it probably wouldn't go that far) so then I go and slap you with a 2! Grrrrr! Please fix Lit Gods (picture this one trying to kick herself in butt)
Now, phenomenal story! I'm a voracious reader of Sci Fi and this story, all of it, but even more so Surfacing, is top 10 in my favorite all time reads! My only complaint is having to wait for more, grumble, grumble, grumble. That said I need to hop thru the rest of the chapters and spread the proper love that I should have when I first read. Just too impatient to keep reading. And too lazy (hangs her head in shame) But picks it back up cause I got stars to pass out, lots of em, in doses of 5!more...
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