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Click hereI walked out of the office, whistling the same classic rock tune and feeling really great about work for the first time in ages. As I drove away from the office, I hit the SEND button on my iPhone, which delivered the true report, which contained the evidence of Desiree's crimes, to Jack. After all I put her through, my final revenge was to send her to prison, anyway.
NEXT CHAPTER: TRIFECTA!
Author's Note: I appreciate the support from followers of this series and apologize for the lateness of this latest entry. As you can probably tell, to write this chapter, I had to channel a violent mindset that I frankly do not possess in reality (odd that when writing about serial murder and war, I have no problems, but when writing about abuse towards a woman, even a bitch like Desiree, I get real squeamish). Either way, I am glad I did it, because it was a good exercise in writing a subject matter with which I was not completely comfortable. The next chapter, which might or might not be the last, will not take so long; it is the chapter I have been dying to write since the beginning.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 2 years agoDisgusting ending totally ruined what was a very good story. Wish I could go back and delete all the stars I awarded.
goducks1over 5 years agowriters should look at the overall content of a series and decide if its "incest/taboo" themed or "mature" or "group" etc themed and stay with that category for the whole series. many readers - like me - don't read certain categories - like "non-consent" so if a chapter was put there i may not see it. Its FAR better that at the outset of each chapter the writer states "this chapter contains some "non-consent" or "bisexual" or "incest/taboo" themed material - and reader be forewarned. many stories fit many categories - and this system lets writers and readers decide.
Anonymousover 5 years agoThis is a sad end in two ways
1) Aaron's treatment of Desiree.
As an earlier comment revealed, I was looking forward to his getting back at her. But this was tooooo much. Especially the tearing of her anus, going directly from anus to her mouth, and peeing in her mouth. Repugnant. Insight into such a malicious mind must be why the founders of our country came out against "cruel and unusual punishment."
Not saying it would be the way to go, but an alternative would be to make it such a wild high for Desiree (and for him), that she would regret her cruel one-sided treatment when she could have gotten some wild highs. Plus regretting she would never get any more.
2) After 9 years, it is obvious we cannot expect the intended (and much needed) sequel. It is a SAD END when the last chapter is the worst of all. I regret that the 5 stars that I willingly gave to previous chapters, this chapter does not deserve -- for creativity and talent, yes; but the meanness and cruelty nullifies it.
I wish a capable Literotica author would continue this -- up until the last chapter -- great series.
Some commenters noted that this is not Incest/Taboo. True, this CHAPTER is Nonconsent/Reluctance category. However, the SERIES, taken as a whole, is Incest/Taboo category. Perhaps it would have been better if this author had followed the practice of authors who rate each chapter according to its appropriate category, rather than rating the whole series the same.
Summary. Great series. With a disappointing end.
Paul in Oklahoma
