"Really? Did he decide to educate you? How boring for you. What was he showing you?"
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GROW UP - You're reading sex stories on the internet! AL Gore will be proud of you!
First, this is only a story, a figment of someone’s imagination unless the author claims the story is true. I didn’t see that disclaimer in any part of the story and even if there was, you’ll need to keep reading in hopes you’ll understand Mattie enjoyed her experience so much she went back for more, many more times!
Second, I don’t believe anyone who was really raped would be reading sex stories on Literotica so that places anonymous – Jeannette’s comment in a precarious position.
Third, reading and comprehension is taught, starting in kindergarten and advanced through all thirteen years. Any intelligent person reading the story will see Mattie, even though she’s a virgin, is bucking her hips up to meet Fred’s thrusts. Below I’ll point out some points that the RAPE complainers obviously missed.
“She gasped at the way it built on her arousal, excitement building on excitement, lifting her higher. She couldn't hold it together. Her whole body was trembling and bouncing under Fred's driving need, matching his need with an even greater one of her own.”
"You're going to ravish me again?" she asked.
"I have to make sure you've learned your lesson. Everyone knows a lesson must be repeated to really strike home."
Mattie looked at the hand covering her breast and slowly relaxed. Obviously he was holding her down and there was nothing she could do. She'd just have to wait and take whatever he dished out. She shuddered nervously, excitement already stirring.”
AT THE END OF THE STORY, it’s obvious to this reader and should have been to all the other readers that Mattie went back to see Fred many more times.
When Mattie was talking to her friend Rose at the end of page 1 she said, “Mm. That's the guy. Do you know that if he decides to teach you something he keeps making you practice it, day after day."
So all you who cried rape owe Ashon an apology….. ghezzzzzzzzz!
I'm also an author on Literotica -more...
RAPE ALERT!
This would be better if she met a lovely handsome guy, her age, who fucked her nice and gently and the pool became a special place for them where they fuck! A thirty year old man raping a young girl over and over makes me feel sick!more...
Literotica shoul open a new category and call it "Rape"
There is nothing funny about rape. It is disgusting. If it had its own category, it would be easier to avoid this crap. Ashon is one sick fuck.
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