Slave to Love Ch. 05

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Sometimes a little love and care goes a long way to mending a broken spirit.

"Good, I'll call for Cia to come get you to prepare you for tonight. If you get hungry again you let her know, and she'll make sure to get you whatever it is you feel like eating, alright?" Again, Eko nodded his head wordlessly, and Daman moved to call on his little intercom, then returned to the bed where Eko was eating the last of the figs quietly.

He hadn't expected to be treated like this when he'd been shown to the door earlier that morning. He'd expected the same as he'd been getting, pain and cruelty, but instead he'd been cherished and cared for. By the time Cia finally made her appearance, Eko was deep in thought. She lead him from the room, once more holding his hand in hers, and while he walked with her he tried to make heads or tails of Daman's actions.

That morning when he'd woken, he'd been sure that Daman was the villain, and Angel was his savior, the one who he was spost to love and be loved by. Things weren't so easy now. His heart ached for the rejection he'd suffered at Angel's hands, and it ached for the new tenderness his Master had shown him.

Once more, his world had turned upside down.

He would have to work these things out for himself, but as it currently stood he'd made an agreement to give himself over to Daman, and the moment that realization set in, cold terror seeped into his bones.

He didn't know what was in store for him, but he was certain that it was nothing he could even begin to expect...

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Thank ya for reading chapter five of Slave to Love! I hope you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed writing it. I would much appreciate it if you'd take a moment to vote below, and if you have time for feedback, I would absolutely love to hear your thoughts on what you liked, and didn't like about this story. I am always looking to improve my writing, and feedback is the best way to accomplish this :) Again, I hope you enjoyed it!

Nikki

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
R@yinne $t@rr

I love your work I can't get enough and if this really is published count on me to buy every book you write I love eko, Damian and most of all I love angel since I first read this I swear I wanted it published so I could add it in my privet naughty erotic library so I hope this happens Happy new year sending you all my best wishes and happiness

JunJaeJunJaealmost 15 years ago
loving it

Do I need to praise you on your writing more than anyone else did already? It's amazing, that's all I can say about it. Though, it is an erotic one, there's substance. However, Eko is just one of those characters that I can never stand.

I wanted Daman to sell him off and realized how being tortured actually is. Though, I don't know how it is in your vocabulary, he has it good yet he denies it; and i hate that rashness in people.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Voice

Your story drew me in and held my attention. The role of Cia, however, broke the spell. She's a princess and you have her speaking in slang. Keep each character in character. She isn't one to use contractions.

The bath scene is rushed. It's time for a lovely exploration of Cia and Eko. How could you forget his wings. Why did you rush this section. Earlier in the story you said Cia enjoyed preparing the slaves for Damon, yet when the time comes, you skip over it. Don't make promises in the work you don't intend to keep. This is a wonderful place to enter a subtext and exploit the moment. What moment of preparing should Angel walk in on. How will this heighten the tension between the two.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
on the edge of my seat

God this story is soooo good... I am just dying to see wut turns out..please grace ur readers with another chapter soon.

windstormywindstormyover 18 years ago
Can I Just Trade?

LOL...I want to trade with Elko. He can come and live my life, and I'll go live his. *Sigh... I know pain is pain, but some people just don't know how good they have it.

And again, I just loved it. I won't beg and plead with you about the next, cause I know you're working on it as best you can. And I appreciate that fact. I know it will be as good, or better, than those you've already submitted. I thank you gratefully for sharing it with me. It was awesome.

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