Suzy had abandoned all inhibition and had her face buried in Laura's pussy while Laura and Courtney made out furiously. Courtney was going to down on her clit still and Amy just laid beside me and Lizzy, now almost making love instead of fucking, and watched while she caressed our bodies.
"You two are so beautiful together," she said and tilted her head down and kissed Lizzy right on the mouth. I came again deep inside of her. And to think, that was just the first two hours of the slumber party. We still had a lot of fun coming for the rest of the night.
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0/10 N oGarfeild
I came here for genuine Garfeild the cat pornography, and you disapointed me.
Pace Yourself
Like others have said, take your time with it. Even if it jumps straight to the fucking like it did, there was still so much more you could have described happening. Keep writing because you have good ideas, just take your time and be a little more descriptive and be patient. It's always best if it happens naturally.more...
It was a good beginning
but it went from, I am not sure about this, to let's fuck, in the time it took for the bottle to make one revolution.
If, however, they had spent the evening with sideways glances, the occasional dare, but lots of incidental contact, and as the slumber gathering wound down, and the lights were off, Lizzie slipped into her brother's room to "talk" about the evening. The tension could have been too much for the two of them to handle. [;-pmore...
Please make ch 2 soon
Awesome story can't wait for ch 2!!!
very good story , I can't wait to see what happens next. Please keep Lizzy and Ray together exclusively and not have this turn into a orgy, that usually ruins the story. Have Lizzy tell her brother that she doesn't want him to screw the others, only her and her alone.more...
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