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The evening was a blur. I was constantly being led ... by protocol for the food ... by Toddworth for the conversation ... by Janie, who, in the bathroom, begged me to take "my guy" and separate them, so that she and Frank could be alone ... and finally, by him. But he was not the demanding master I had envisioned him to be. In fact, he seemed to be completely lacking in the finer arts of animalistic rutting and brutal misogyny that I had experienced before in men. I was very confused.
And then he kissed me ... and the whole world changed forever.
To Be Continued
- COMMENTS
JasonRTaylorover 9 years agoVery well told, I do hope this has some conclusion and is not left hanging!
Anonymousover 10 years agoWell edited, well thought out. Managed to do a "flashback" without it feeling overly contrived or forced.
All you have to do now is stick the landing.
Couple of pieces of advice, don't feel like you have to fill it with sex, and dont drag it out longer than it needs to be. Im sure you probably already have a feel for the ending, look for the most direct path there and write, the fluff will fill itself in.
Looking forward to the rest of the series.
A Wiseman
