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She went to her room exhausted. The computer was still off she was annoyed. Jessica looked at it in disbelief that nothing was happening.

Then she thought that perhaps she should plug the computer in. She didn't know why this might help it was unplugged before and still worked before without being plugged in but still at least if that didn't work she could search for something anything to help her in her situation.

She down on all fours and tried to reach round the bottom of the desk it was behind a piece of glass that while looked good was a nightmare to get to.

"Hey Mom what you doing?"

Shit it was Alex in his dressing gown.

"Just plugging in the computer."

"Oh right, look are you not wearing any underwear?"

She was confused for a moment until realising.

"Oh yeah I took them off when I got changed."

"Why?"

"Come on you know why."

He walked over to her.

"So is that why Dad left."

She didn't expect this question she couldn't tell him the truth she didn't know how he'd take it.

"He just had to it's hard to explain."

"Ok Mom well at least he won't be turning up drunk to my birthday party again." He said jokingly.

"Oh god yes, last week was horrible, your friends didn't mind that much did they?" Jessica said glad that the tension of that day had seemed to have gone.

"Nah Jacks still got a video of him wrestling the toaster on his phone"

"Oh is that when the lights went out?"

"Yep, the bugger blew the fuse."

"But at least he fixed it the next day."

"Good old Dad the Man of the House." He laughed

"Yeah well I guess you're the man of the house now."

"Oh god that doesn't mean I have to wear his slippers does it?"

They both laughed at the dumb joke. Which for Jessica meant that the tension of that day seemed to have gone away. It was nice to joke with her son like a normal mother and son. She started to think that perhaps the story ended with the hand job and that they could return to normal now. She still needed to check her e-mails though.

"No of course it doesn't." She said once she had calmed herself down. "Although some help now would be nice"

She gestured toward the plug socket.

"Of course." Alex said excitedly.

She took her hand out from the other side of the desk and waited till Alex knelt down to help her. As she did, he knelt down behind her as she watched the plug socket expecting him to try to plug the computer in.

Instead she felt something poke her vulva. She was confused for a moment then before she realised the whole length of Alex's 8 inch cock thrust into her.

"Oh... oh... Alex" she moaned as he thrust into her.

"Oh my... Uh ... Yes mom?" He wrapped one on his hands round her breast.

"I didn't... I didn't mean fuck me." She said in a hushed tone as he push in and out of her.

"Oh do you... want me to stop?"

"Well.. It's just a bit... uncomfortable... under here." She said in between bumping her head on the desk.

"Oh sorry" he said as her removed his dick from her quickly and standing up to leave. He looking scared worried he'd crossed the line.

She gave his dick an encouraging stroke; he couldn't leave, not now.

"How about the bed." She said looking into her sons eyes.

"Yes! Of course" he said.

She took off her dress and lay on the bed spreading her legs.

"You know you were conceived on this bed, would have been born on it too of it wasn't for the C-section never liked the fact that that happened ever child should have the chance to come out his mother's vagina."

"Well let's change that." He said thrusting into her.

"Oh... Oh that's my boy." She spoke as she grabbed the back of his head.

"Oh... oh this is so good." He said as he grabbed her leg.

"Yesss... Yes this need to happen."

He thrust harder into her filling her cunt up with his cock she felt full with him inside her the way she hadn't with Tony.

He grabbed her breast as he continued to move in and out of her..

"Needed to happen." He asked concerned. "Didn't you want this to happen?"

"Yes... Yes of course." She said as he nuzzled on her neck. "I did... I have for soooo... long.... Ahhh."

She did want this to happen, after all this was what she was for she was made to fuck him and he was made to fuck her.

He kissed her massaging her tongue with his he tasted incredible as did she. She grabbed one of his firm buttocks as it thrust into her she could feel the muscles contact and relax as he thrust hard into her but npt hard enough she needed more. She broke their kiss.

"HARDER!!!" she yelled as she dug her nails slightly into his buttock.

He obliged removing himself from her slightly then ramming himself more into his mother's womb and then again and again. Thrusting himself deeper and deeper into her and with each thrust a more intense rush of pleasure for both of them.

Alex grabbed one of her legs and wrapped it round himself; it felt great as his cock buried itself inside her. Her wet soft pussy wrapped around his manhood as thrust in and out of it. Her muscles contracting as he was inside her milking it, squeezing it as he fucked her cunt the place where she came from pushing it deeper and deeper into her.

He kissed her breast wrapping her mouth around her nipple sucking it gently then moving his tongue around it before she grabbed his head. He started kissing upwards, he kissed the top of her breast, then her neck then up to her chin the after hovering over her mouth. He stopped thrusting. She looked at him worried.

"Do you Love me?" He said thrusting deep into her then away from her again.

"Yes!" She whispered in his ear.

He resumed pumping in and out of her.

"Do you love me?" She said worriedly

"Of course." He said looking into her eyes.

'Of course he does.' She thought. 'He's my son.' She looked down to see his penis going inside and out of her. Anyway it was part of the story that he love her. Yes the story the story of them fucking the fucking that was happening now. That'd be over soon.

Then as if to distract her Alex grabbed both her breasts and thrust upwards in her vagina hitting the G-spot.

"Oh... oh... my god..." She said as she looked at her muscular son moving on top of her. She put an arm round his back and pulled him towards her.

"OH... oh.... Alex I'm cumming... cumming Alex oh... oh my" she hadn't had an orgasm in years and even so this was the best she ever had. Electricity surged throughout her body as wave after wave of pleasure went through her and every muscle contracted.

"Oh......... oh....... That... that was good." She smiled.

"That's good Mom." Alex said. He was still pumping his cock in and out of her. She never knew a man could have an orgasm after the woman but there he was enjoying every second.

'Then again' she thought 'maybe it's good he hasn't cum yet, when he does the story is over and when that happens... then what would it be over would this never happen again or would the vanish into oblivion that couldn't happen, not now not after tonight.'

"Oh... oh Mom... oh... I'm gonna cum... mom I'm gonna cum in you!"

He said yelling at wall.

"NO!" She yelled scared of what would happen.

"You want me to pull out?"

"No... no" she said confused "Just... Just.. stay with me!"

"Ok Mom" he staying inside her

"Oh Mom... Oh Mom I'm cum... I'm gonna cum my baby making spunk right in my mother's cunt." He yelled.

"Ok Alex there's no need to make the weird!" she said as her son grabbed her by the shoulders and pushed her down on his cock as he thrust deep inside her and squirted his sperm deep inside her womb.

It was all ending now, the story the world she had lived in she thought as she lay below. She didn't know what to do what would happen after it all ended. What would happen to her son, she had to protect from it from the end she was his mother she had to protect him. She thought as the last strands of his cum was pushed into her.

"Ah... ahhhh . ahhhhhhhhhhhh." He said as he came wrapping himself in his mother's arms giving her lot of small kisses on her neck and shoulder then it was over he lay above her, his flaccid penis still in her his cum swimming inside her and then all of the worry and fear washed away as she lay naked wrapped in her sons arms both of them in sexual and emotion bliss.

"I love you."

"I love you too Mom." He smiled.

The End.

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Punctuation and grammar are your friends.

SirFrankieCrispSirFrankieCrispalmost 3 years ago

First to be an author, amateur or professional, one has to master the tools of his/her craft; in this case, the tool is the English language. The author simply doesn't know how the language works, it's punctuation, the concept of pronouns... Seriously, learn about commas, and when and how to use them.

Most importantly, proofread what you wrote. Have respect for your audience and write like an adult that went to a school.

I'm not trying to be mean. But you need to know that it's not enough to have interesting ideas. You must learn how to convey those ideas to others properly.

Now, the plot. Why was it made into a piece of 'self-aware fiction'. Watch the movie Stranger than Fiction with Will Ferrell. The reason for the main character being a work of fiction is important to the plot, and we understand who the author is and the conflict of the story, and its resolution, are dependent upon it being a work of fiction.

Why is it a work of fiction within fiction? We don't know and never find out.

Who is the author? We don't know and never find out.

The ending of the story is not an ending. What happens? Do they cease to exist? Do they break the fiction barrier?

The story could have been an actual story without the author telling the main character that she's in a work of fiction. (I mean, if it was written well and had an ending.)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More?

So , how do you get them into the next story? And what part does the narrirator play? Lots of ways this could go dont you think.

ErotFanErotFanover 7 years ago
What a great story idea

You could embellish it with further dialogues betwee the mother and unplugged computer. Intersperced with story development.

Quirky. But then so many great story ideas are.

Your Introductory dialogue was plausable.

You stories still can benefit with edtiing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Jessica is awakened by her son's slow thrusts.

Jessica woke up to an incredible sensations as Alex was slowly working his cock inside her pussy. She opened her eyes, and in the faint light she could see her son's face smiling down at her. "I'm sorry to wake you mom," Alex said. "I woke up hard inside you, and I just couldn't help but move a little." "I can't think of anything better than waking up to my son's cock moving inside me," Jessica purred. Since his mom was awake now, Alex began to pick up the speed and intensity of his thrusting. He loved the feeling of his mom's tits against his chest, her nipples poking against him. Jessica couldn't help but start moaning as her son's strokes were quickly exciting her. Alex brought his lips to his mother's for a passionate kiss. Alex broke the kiss as he looked down at his mom's face he said, "This is better than I could have ever imagined mom, I love you so much." "Oh I love you too honey, I've wanted this for so long," Jessica moaned back. Within seconds, she realized an orgasm was approaching fast. She couldn't help but start verbally expressing her pleasure. "Oh Alex, oh honey, you feel so good." "Pump that cock into your mother's pussy baby." "Oh Alex, oh god, I'm getting close!" When Alex heard that, he also knew that he wouldn't last much longer either, pumping his cock at nearly a frantic pace. "Oh mom, I'm almost there!" Alex exclaimed. "Oh honey, Oh honey!" "Cum inside me Alex!" "I'm going to cum too!" "Fuck me Alex!" "Fuck me!" Sweat dripping from his face, Alex was at the point of no return. All he could think about was slamming his cock into his mother, until he was releasing gobs of his cum inside her pussy. "Oh god, I'm coming mom!" Alex loudly yelled. "Oh Alex!" "Oh yes!" "Oh yes!" "Oh god honey!" "I'm coming too!" "Fuck me Alex!" "Fuck me honey!"

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