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Fredrick noticed that she started to climb the wall. While she wasn't really skilled and posed no threat, his orders overpowered that.
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Anya saw a man sitting in a tower, she yelled and waved her arms rapidly trying to get his attention, but he wouldn't budge. She flung herself from the car's hood and started to climb the wall. She saw something glimmer in the light as she pulled herself up.
She heard a shot but didn't see a thing.
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Fredrick targeted her head, he pulled the trigger with ease from experience. The girl never saw it coming. Her head ricocheted back as the bullet went through her brain. He couldn't see the blood gush from the wound but he knew she was dead as she took her place amongst the others he and his team shot down. Maybe she had a family and other loved ones, but she was the past now.
- COMMENTS
zoyiabover 12 years agoI really liked the beginning of this story. too bad it wasn't a bit longer
Zachswifeover 12 years agoThis is a great story idea, but I think the actual story needs some work. A little more detail, a little longer. Don't rush through it quite so fast.
