He planned on leaving but his feet wouldn't move. He wanted to walk right back up there to her but his feet would not budge so he just stood there watching her open the store and greet people. After a couple of hours she closed and left with the man. He finally had enough and drove away. Tomorrow he had a date with her and maybe his words wouldn't hide from him. But he would win her back no matter what.
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Time line issue?
Great effort. You might want to amend the time frame from culinary school to the NYC opening. It's difficult to believe that she attended/graduated culinary school and opened 6 bakeries in three years.more...
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